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 Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)

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PostSubject: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Fri Mar 11, 2011 2:39 am

Arrancar/Espada Application


~Basic~
Name: Mateo Partenzia
Alias/Nickname: Matty, Teo
Actual Age: 700
Physical Age: 21
Gender: Male
Rank: Numero 14
Modified: No

~Appearance~
Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 135 lbs
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color/Style: Short, messy black hair
Complexion: Fair
Remains of Mask: A thin necklace with a beak-like pendant.
Hollow Hole: Six Inches above his navel
Espada Tattoo: N/A
Picture:

~Personality~
Personality: Mateo is a quiet individual who isn't much for interacting with people. He's calm, level headed, and on overall friendly person to those he enjoys the company of. He's mellow and isn't very quick to anger, unless someone threatens a person he holds dear. He's picky when it comes to the opposite sex. He only likes a specific type of woman. He can't stand loud, obnoxious, and overly violent females. He sees that behavior as un lady-like, and a complete turn off. Even more of a turn off for him are women who act like harlots. He finds them to be pathetic people with no self-respect and an utter waste of life. He has a colder side at times. He often gets to where he just wants to be alone. If anyone ever bothers him during one of his "Moods," he'll attack without warning. The only people he won't attack are dear friends that he allows close.
Quirks: Twirls a lock of his hair when he thinks
Sexuality: Straight
Relationship Status: Single and very picky
History: Mateo was born in Central America to a couple in an Aztec tribe that lived in the city of Tenochtitlan. Growing up, he was raised by the high priest of his tribe after his parents were killed by disease brought by Spanish explorers. By age eighteen, he was an accomplished medicine man in the village. Things went downhill when a drought struck the land. Crops and livestock began to die. The high priest felt that the gods were angry at the village for some reason, he blaming Mateo for his unorthodox healing methods. As a result, he was sacrificed atop the Great Pyramid of Tenochtitlan. He died with regrets, leaving him bound to the pyramid for years until his regret got the best of him. His chain shattered, he becoming a hollow soul.

Upon arriving in Hueco Mundo, he was already a Menos Grande. She stalked the Menos Forest, devouring all he could to build his power. After a century of eating and absorbing power, he progressed to an adjuchas. In his new form, he resembled a large, six foot tall albatross with a twenty foot wing span. His wings were silver and shimmered like steel in the moonlight. His head resembled a bird's skull because of his evolved mask. For five hundred years, he ruled the skies over Hueco Mundo, stalking prey and killing as many hollows as he could for power. He ate and ate, gaining more and more power. The day he turned six hundred years old, he attained the power needed to rip away his mask and progress to an arrancar, his true self sealed away in a katana that manifested itself after his change. He took refuge in a cavern beneath the desert, hidden deep within the forest of menos. This is where he came to hone his abilities and master his true power over wind. A hundred years later, now present day, he wanders the desert, keeping patrol through the sands, never knowing what he's looking for.

~Resurreccion~

Name: Ehecatl
Seal Description: Ehecatl looks like a normal Katana. The scabbard is white with six, horizontal black bands along it's length. The guard resembles a pair of outstretched wings. The blade is snow white, the handle being white as well with three horizontal black bands in a similar pattern to the scabbard.
Aspect of Death: Respect
Release Phrase: "Blow Them Away"
Element/Class type: Wind
Resurreccion Appearance: When released, Mateo first grows a pair of seven foot long wings that are silver in color. These wings are part of his released Zanpakuto. Each wing holds fifteen feather like blades. They're used for long distance combat. His arms and hands become covered in clawed gauntlets. They cover from his elbow, down. Three, feather shaped blades stick out from the forearm while six inch, steel claws extend from the fingertips. He also gains a mask that covers from his upper lip, up over the rest of his head and resembles an Albatross' skull.

~Standard Techniques~ Name: Cero
Description: Standard arrancar technique. A concentrated blast of reiatsu that reflects the user's power. Mateo's is a bright crimson color.
Duration: instant
Cool Down: 1 posts

Name: Bala
Description: Standard arrancar technique. A hardened blast of reiatsu that is weaker than a cero, but is faster to fire.
Duration: instant
Cool Down: 1 posts

Name: Sonido
Description: Standard arrancar technique. A speedy form of of transportation, similar to a shunpo.
Duration: instant
Cool Down: N/A

Name: Pesquisas
Description: Standard arrancar technique. Used to locate spiritual pressures
Duration: instant
Cool Down: N/A

Name: High speed Regeneration
Description: Mateo's body allows him to heal his wounds far quicker than the average person. He can heal minor cuts, burns and bruises in three posts, and major cuts, burns, broken bones, and amputations in 6 posts
Duration: Stated above
Cool Down: 4 posts after healing minor injuries/ 8 posts after healing major injuries.

~Innate Techniques~
Name: Zephyr Blade
Usage: Sealed
Description: Mateo releases a gale of wind that is concentrated into a flurry of thin blades by filling the air with his own reiatsu. Each blade is about four inches long and about a centimeter thick. He usually releases up to twenty with a single swing of his sealed Zanpakuto. If he uses a weak swing, the blades are weaker and can be easily be deflected by one of any rank. If he swings with his full strength, the blades are much harder to deflect except by anyone above Lieutenant/fraccion level.
Duration: 1 posts
Cool Down: 2 posts

Name: Dance of Blades
Usage: Resurreccion
Description: Mateo Flaps his wings, launching his blade like feathers at a target. The blades can travel op to thirty feet before they pull a boomerang effect and return to their rightful place on his wings. The blades can be stopped or deflected by one of Captain/Espada level power, and Lieutenent/fraccion level. Shinigami at seated officer can stop them with kido spells, but only with spells 30 and up.
Duration: 1 posts
Cool Down: 3 posts

Name: Blade Hurricane
Usage: Resurreccion
Description: Similar to the Zephyr Blade technique, Mateo fills the air with a higher concentration of his reiatsu, then, with one strong flap of his wings or with a slash in the air with his claws, he can release a greater amount of wind blades at a target. He releases up to 100 with his wings, and up to 50 with his claws. Similar to zephyr blade, the strength of the blades. Weak flaps and slashes create blades that can be deflected by one at any power level. Stronger flaps and slashes creates blades that can be deflected by one of Captain/Espada level power, and Lieutenent/fraccion level. Shinigami at seated officer can stop them with kido spells, but only with spells 30 and up.
Duration: 1 posts
Cool Down: 5 posts

Name: Harpy's Scream
Usage: Sealed
Description: A defensive ability, Mateo inhales a great deal of air, then releases it in the form of a shockwave coupled with a shrill, earsplitting scream. The shockwave knocks back any targets weaker than lieutenant level within the twenty foot range, and the scream confuses and potentially deafens the affected targets. The scream is so loud that it could be heard a mile away.
Duration: Shockwave: 1 post Scream/deafening effect/ 2 posts
Cool Down: 4 posts

~Rp Sample~
Silence filled the ever barren desert of white sand. Not a single sound was heard, save for the soft footsteps of the self proclaimed God of the wind. The man stood at six feet, two inches. His vivid green eyes scanned the empty desert for any sign of life. Nothing was found. Peculiar. Much to his pleasure, he was alone with only his thoughts as company. He paused near a large dune of soft sand and sat down. He exhaled slowly, his lids drifting down until his eyes were half closed. He had not slept in what seemed like years. He fought to stay awake, his eyes getting heavy, his head bobbing to the left every so often. He just couldn't do it. He slumped into the sand, his body giving in to its own exhaustion. He began to snore softly, a signal of his sweet slumber. At last. The Albatross came to roost.

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PostSubject: Re: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Fri Mar 11, 2011 7:40 am

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Name: High speed Regeneration
Description: Mateo's body allows him to heal his wounds far quicker than the average person.
Duration: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

How much quicker are we talking? because if you are talking about something that would effect battle (like other arrancars sometimes have) then that would not be a standard tech but a unique one also it would need to be more detailed so we know how fast things heal.

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Name: Zephyr Blade
Usage: Sealed
Description: Mateo releases a gale of wind that is concentrated into a flurry of thin blades by filling the air with his own reiatsu. Each blade is about four inches long and about a centimeter thick. He usually releases up to twenty with a single swing of his sealed Zanpakuto
Duration: 1 posts
Cool Down: 2 posts

How large is this swing/effected amount of wind? Also i imagine that they would do little more than minor damage and could be blocked or defended against? if not then please detail more

Quote :
Name: Blade Hurricane
Usage: Resurreccion
Description: Similar to the Zephyr Blade technique, Mateo fills the air with a higher concentration of his reiatsu, then, with one strong flap of his wings or with a slash in the air with his claws, he can release a greater amount of wind blades at a target. He releases up to 100 with his wings, and up to 50 with his claws.
Duration: 1 posts
Cool Down: 5 posts
Same as above

Quote :
Name: Dance of Blades
Usage: Resurreccion
Description: Mateo Flaps his wings, launching his blade like feathers at a target. The blades can travel op to thirty feet before they pull a boomerang effect and return to their rightful place on his wings. The blades can be stopped or deflected by one of Captain/Espada level power.
Duration: 1 posts
Cool Down: 3 posts
Your character is only arrancar/numero so i dont see why lieutenant and fraccions couldn't stop or deflect them. Plus i dont see why seated officers using kido couldnt either.

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Name: Harpy's Scream
Usage: Sealed
Description: A defensive ability, Mateo inhales a great deal of air, then releases it in the form of a shockwave coupled with a shrill, earsplitting scream. The shockwave knocks back any targets within the twenty foot range, and the scream confuses and potentially deafens the affected targets. The scream is so loud that it could be heard a mile away.
Duration: Shockwave: 1 post Scream/deafening effect/ 2 posts
Cool Down: 2 posts
Not all targets would be knocked back necessarily, those with strong enough reiatsu might be able to hold their place etc. Also the cooldown needs to be longer.


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PostSubject: Re: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Fri Mar 11, 2011 2:34 pm

Edited! o3o;
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PostSubject: Re: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:00 pm

Bump~ *because Teo told me to x.x*

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PostSubject: Re: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:54 am

I apoligose for the delay on my behalf....i had MAJOR internet issues x.x i had hoped that other staff would take over in my absence but it seems not. Anyway..

only thing i see right now is that you didn't increase the cooldown on the harpy's scream ability ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:11 am

Increased the cooldown~:3
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PostSubject: Re: Mateo Partenzia (Done :3)   Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:56 am

It's good to see people taking some of the lower ranks ^^ finally some people that aren't concerned with having incredible strength Smile


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