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Takeshi Yudai



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PostSubject: Takeshi Yudai[done]   Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:07 pm

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~Basic~

Name: Takeshi Yudai
Alias/Nickname: Yudai kun
Actual Age: 110
Physical Age: 16
Gender: male
Division: 13
Rank: 4th seat

~Appearance~

Height: 5"7
Weight: 124
Eye Color: purple
Hair Color/Style: Dark Purple , bangs are longer than back
Complexion: creame
Any distinguishing features: his eyes , necklace he wears around his neck.
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~Personality~

Personality:

Takashi is usaully pretty calm and collected looking when he alone. When speaking he seems to have kindess to his voice. Takashi tries to be sarcastic at times , but it usaully just sounds like he's being rude. If someone takes it the wrong way he will usaully aplogize and explain he was kidding. Yudai hates when people are mad at so, hell try his hardness to mend a fight. If he forgets something it will usaully bother him all day untill he remembers it. That forgetten thing will probably be all he thinks about between other thoughts. Yudai also has a habit of mumbling this to himself for example a insult to someone or something on his mind.

Yudai is very shy about be touched so, he will often blush if someone touches his skin. He also has a habit of hiding in small places to think. He calls these places his thiken place , even though the spot changes often. If he is stuck on a problem will ask a random person for thier intake on it. If will often start the encounter with what if you or something like that. Takashi hates being ignored and will become pissed off he is and ignored that person untill they apolgized. People have called him childish for this action.

For the most part he's a pretty nice guy even though he also shes flustered.In battle he will not give up untill the mission is complete no matter what. Takeshi will also insult himself if he cant figure something out.


Sexuality: bi-sexual
Relationship Status: single
Quirks: his sword skills , he usaully zones out insults , his hair

History:
Takashi was born into the noble yudai family. Almost all the members in his family become shinigami and had lighting zanpaktou. Takeshi 's mother was only one to have an ice zanpaktou. When Takeshi appeared 10 his mother wanted him to enter the shinigami acdemey. His father told his mother his was to distracted all them time. Takeshi didnt really agree with his father so he joined up anyway. In the acdemy he excelled the most in kido and sword fighting.

When he came home from school he often showed his sister some the spells he had learned. She loved watching him and prentend to cast them herself. Once and while his father would sword fight pratice with him. Takeshi was never able to beat his 3rd seat ranked father at the time. " When you can beat me you will have became a vice captain" his father told him every time he lost a fight to him. " Leave brother alone his sister would usaully scream out. Even though he knew he could win he challenge his father many times and still lost.

Upon graduation he obtained his zanapaktou and join sqaud thirteen as a unseated officers.When he told his parents they were very happy for him. " You got Shikai?" he father asked him rudely that day. " No" the purple haired bo answered. " Well hurry up at get or youll be worthless' his father repiled. After that his father turned to his 9 years old sister and told her she better become a shingami to. ' Hikaru stop it" came Takeshi's mother's kind voice. For may years after that he trained really hard and was able to obtain shikai when he looked 14. A couple months later he was granted the spot as the 4th seat of the sqaud. At this time his sister started her journey in the shinigami acdemy.

He also challenage his father again and came a little closer to beating him , but still lost." Your almost there son , yuh need just two more steps and you'll make" His father said with a smile. He also helps his sister train which help her with her skills. A couple months later his sister graduated earily and become the seventh seat of the 13th sqaud. Today the siblings still train together in hopes of surpassing thier father together.



~Zanpakuto Information~

Blade Name: Raikomushi [ Lightning bug]
Sealed Blade appearance: Its a medium sized blade that sits in his belt when hes not using it. The wrappings on the handle are a bright yellow color that mirrors the color of the holder. The guard looks like the outline of and winged bug. Toward the but of thr sword a red ribbon hangs off. The blade also gives off a small sparkle.
Zanpaktou spirit: His spirt takes form a girl with green hair thats looks about fifteen in age. The girl wears a short white dress and she has flowery white and yellow wings on her back.
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Inner world A peaceful feild with many yellow flowers scattered about. There are a few tree with red ribbions hanging from the branches. Butterflies also fly about and small shack is in the distance. A soft smoke surrounds the shack like a moat. A dark cloud hang above the shack. The cloud sparks yellow lighting and often strikes the shack.

~Shikai Information~

Release Phrase: Spark out
Released blade appearance: The hilt bugs wings spread out and become pointed. The blad takes the shape of a lightning bolt and gaines and zig zagged hole in the middle. The but of the word also gains spike wings.
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~Shikai Techniques/Abilities~ (seated officers can have 1-2 shikai abilities depending on the strength of those abilities, Lieutenants can have 2 of considerable strength, and Captains can have 3 powerful ones. )

Name of abilty/technique: Lightning Comets [ Raiko kometto]
Description: He shoots Lightning balls with tail at the end of them at his enemy. He can shoot about two at a time and the are meduim sized[about the size of large baseball]. The ball part shocks the enemy upon impact.the shock is enough to deal third degree burns to the hit area. The tail part breaks off and falls down upon the upon the enemy in small sparks. The spark feel like hail on the targets skin , but they dont do much damage.The comets travel toward the enemy at 40 miles per hour.
Duration: 4
Cool Down: 2
Preparation: 1

Name of abilty/technique: Lightning Strike[ Raiko thigyou]
Description: His sword glows a bright yellow and he rams it into the ground. A cloud then opens up in the sky. A large yellow bolt of Lightning the strikes down toward the enemey he can use then make the blot follow the enemy untill it hits them. Its travels at about 35-40 mph.
Duration: 2
Cool Down: 4
Preparation: 1

~Bankai~(Captains only) (no more than 3 abilities)

Bankai Appearance/spirit manifestation: not achived yet.

~Bankai Techniques/Abilities~

Name:
Description:
Duration:
Cool Down:
Preparation:

Name of abilty/technique:
Description:
Duration:
Cool Down:
Preparation:

~Other Techniques~
Swordsmanship: Advanced
Shunpo:Intermediate
Hand to hand: Basic
Kido: Advanced
Others(is their any other abilities that you feel need mentioning?)

~Other Information~(Could be additional weapons or anything else you like use to know)

~Rp Sample~
Takeshi woke up that morning knowing that he had forgetton to do something the pervious day. As usaully he had forgotten what that thing was. ugh what is it he said to himself as he got out of bed. "Come on stupid" he called himself as he got dressed in his uniform. Groaning loudly he exited the room after pitting his sword in his obi. As he walked down the hallway he mumbled to himself loudly. What Werido a women passing by said to her friend in a tone that was loud enough for the boy to hear. Takeshi should no sign of hearing the women and turned the corner.

Seeing an open door frame he stopped a sat in the frame. The cleaning shinigami wanted to close it and growled at the small framed boy. " What was that?" Takeshi asked the brown haired man. The man ignored him and walked down the hallway with his broom. " How Rude? I freaking ask you something and you dont bother to reply." The purple haired boy mumbled as the man walked passed again and the flash stepped away. Yudai kun the growled slighty as he pulled his knees to his chest. " Crap what was i thinking about before man showed up." he said to himself in a fustrated tone as he rested his forehead on his knees.

Other characters you currently have on the site:

Name: Izuru Kira
Race: shinigami
Rank: squad three captain

Name: Gin Ichimaru jr
Race: shinigami
Rank: vice captain of squad 12

Name: Toshiro Hitsugaya
Race: shinigami
Rank: 10th vice captain

Name: Naokai Kin
Race: espada
Rank: 9th

i also have a mod soul named kei , please delete him.



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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Yudai[done]   Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:19 pm

Just one thing:

Quote: Blade Name: Tenka konchuu [lignting bug]

Should be spelled 'lightning bug'.

Also, Tenka means 'fire caused by lightning' rather than lightning itself.

A better translation of Lightning Bug would be 'Raikomushi'

Dunno about you but I think that sounds cooler Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Yudai[done]   Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:26 pm

thanks for the heads up.
edited. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Yudai[done]   Sun Mar 20, 2011 9:53 pm

hi ^^,

i will delete the mod soul account for you.

* Could you add some more detail to the history, it needs to be a bit longer.

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Name of abilty/technique: Lightnig Comets [ Raiko kometto]
Description: He shoots lighting balls with tail at the end of them at his enemy. He can shoot about three at a time and the are meduim sized. The ball part shocks the enemy upon impact. The tail part breaks off and falls down upon the upon in small sparks. The comets travel toward the enemy at 40 miles per hour.
Duration: 4
Cool Down: 2
Preparation: 1
might want to fic the typo in the word Lightning ^^ Also could you make it a maximum of 2 that he can fire at once. How large is medium sized? How bad is the shock the target recieves? also what does the part about the tail part breaks off and falls down upon the upon in the small sparks?

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Name of abilty/technique: Lighting Strike[ Raiko thigyou]
Description: His sword glows a bright yellow and he rams it into the ground. A cloud then opens up in the sky. A large yellow bolt of lighting the strikes down toward the enemy he can use then make the bolt follow the enemy untill it hits them. Its travels at about 35-40 mph.
Duration: 3
Cool Down: 4
Preparation: 1
Also the typo here as well in the word Lightning, im unsure how the bolt would follow the target o.O but i will allow it ^^ but the maximum duration it can do so should be 2 for now. Since he is 4th seat Smile and a lightning bolt is strong really

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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Yudai[done]   Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:17 am

better?
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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Yudai[done]   Mon Mar 21, 2011 1:42 am

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