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PostSubject: Kade Hiroshima   Sat Mar 19, 2011 1:40 am

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~Basic~


Name: Kade Hiroshima
Alias/Nickname: Kade, Kaz
Actual Age: 390 yrs old
Physical Age: 29 yrs old
Gender: Male
Division: Formerly Division 6
Rank: Formerly Vice Captain

~Appearance~

Height: 5'12
Weight: 197lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color/Style: White
Complexion: Somewhat Athletic
Any distinguishing features: Disfigurement scars from cancer
Appearance: . However, as a teen/young adult, he's thin, has red irises, and short black hair that was cut with his bangs sloped down the left side of his face. Though his hair remains in a fairly consistent style throughout his adulthood, there are a few minor changes, including its evolution into pure white. As a young adult, his hair is hanging down all around his head, in his mid-adult years, his bangs are somewhat parted and in his prime, his hair is parted with his bangs in front of his right eye. Even though his does have good physical shape his body still it kinda bad shape because he saved himself from the cancer. But the effects of cancer still linger leaving 1/4 of his face completely disfigure the cancer has completely burned part of his face leaving long black jagged scars of his face. From his first mission his body was burned from cero attacks leaving some black burns all over his body. His face is a complete and total mess after being killed nobody barely recognize him. Because of this his right eye has red retina and black retina blood veseels

Severe Burns on the head, face, or neck which the reason after being killed the person responsible put sulfur acid on his face. Combined with the treated cancer started burning his face which he trying to keep alive from the pain of it all. It really did a number to his face structure. His facial recognition is completely gone leaving him being an darkly figure mostly like a monster then the shinigami that he used to be. This kinda left Kade with an angry facial structure. Kade shows the open mouth form of an anger expression.

His Loner atttire comes with vest is black, pants are a dark gray with black pin stripe and the sweater is a brownish. Kade actually created a flat black costume in order to keep himself hidden from his own kind or any others. He does wear a stitch mask with U.S. Issued 1930 googles with some mirror tint on the lenses. Also his gigai has the same costume. Because of what happen to him, he never show his face to anybody fearing the things they'll say about him. Truthfully, Nobody has seen his face which he finds a goof relief. So the mask won't come off
His other attire consisted of Jeans, T-Shirt, Biker Jacket, A domino mask that is held in place by Spirit Gum, and The Black Mask. His mask contains a Radio Transmitter and Receiver as well as Night Vision.

~Personality~

Personality: Kade Hiroshima was once a lone shinigami no more and no less. He doesn't feel pity, remorse or fear but truthfully the shinigami does have a code of honor in protecting people. Sometimes he'll listen to reason but then walk away in regret. Kade has a great desire to be the best & powerful shinigami on his own thinking the path of lone shinigami is his way of life. He'll often talk if necessary but very rarely he'll open his mouth and talk. After his near death, he felt pain and anger being betrayed by people he trusted left him in whirlwind of feelings of regrets and revenge over the people who tried to wipe him out. The feelings he had to that evil shinigami were cold and unsettling....he never did like the guy something evil about an shinigami. After finally being discovered alive, Kade felt that he finally got his confidence back that he could serve and honor the Soul society with loyalty and servitude without any regrets of the past to stop him. He had a unstoppable rage of killing hollows or anybody that threaten the Soul society or the people serving under it. He does show a kind & caring attitude around his companion though.

Around friends, Kade feels like he had a friend maybe just more then a companion but he tries to act according to the shinigami code around her. Even though he's serious and honorbound at times, Kade does have a caring attitude despite his agressive programming from the scientists which he doesn't think himself as a tool but as a human being. Hopefully around his new friends maybe he can act like a normal shinigami then he was created to do. In short, Kade had something of an half breed law abiding attitude but deep down the soul within him cares about his family and friends hoping to bring out some compassion towards a new life. However, his apperance and for what has happen his friends still have a tough time fixing the damage dent to his heart. Really he start to have nightmares and he'll go back to his anti social persona.
Sexuality: Straight
Relationship Status: Single & maybe looking
Quirks: He has a shy attempt of trying to get along with other people & shinigami but really because of his programming. Kade really just had one friend. His zanpakuto...it's sad really. Another thing is because of his disfigured face, Kade still refuses to talk to get help in deadly or helpful situations which is why he wears a mask.

History: Kade Warren the son of Miles and Abagail Warren really wanted to a normal kid but times were really bad for him. Before his was born, Abagail developed cancer with was worse if he she had a child. Both her and Kade were treated by local doctors saying the child would die soon and that his time was running out. The Warren Family didn't let something like cancer get them down they tried to make the best of it. Kade was a happy kid making good friends with the local friends. Three years passed and Kade started getting sicker the cancer was spreading. The family realized their child was dying as problems started happening like refusal for food and hourly seizures. One morning, Abagail and Miles went to check on their son and they notice that he stopped breathing as they tried reviving him. Miles felt no pulse his son was dead which Kade's funeral was the next day. This was just the beginning for the young boy. Kade woke up th next day seeing his mother crying as he tried to run to her the child stops. He notices a chain connected to his chest as he was trying to figure out what was going on. Then he hears his mother saying that he was dead. Kade tried to touch her but it was like the boy was just pass right threw her.

A soul reaper appeared and used konsu upon him but he didn't even enter into the Rukongai district. He was actually given the chance to become a soul reaper at a young age which he didn't do well in the academy in the beginning. Growing up was hard but he managed to get through some obstacles in his life then finally graduating from the academy. He gave his zanpakuto a name know as Myou Kyoukan which suited it very well. Kade was supposed to go into the Ninth Division but Dr. Evelyn Necker had other plans for the shinigami. Kade actually refused the experimentation heading back into the Soul society, he didn't want any part of science being done to his body.

Truthfully, his memory about his past was leaving him forgetting everything about his human life to him it was an ancient memory. However, Kade still had the effects of the cancer even though he was healthy the process still left his face a little disfigured. During missions, Kade started becoming bitter amon other shinigami a spot was open for squad eleven and he refused. Members of Squad Two were wondering why a person who refused that spot even some captains were baffled.

During some mission Kade would help people then he would just walk away some of the captains wonder why he wasn't socialable like the others. Then he started taking up solo missions which the Soul society wasn't fond on doing but Kade kept pushing the envelope during dangeruous missions which even the captains wouldn't do. A captain requested Kade to be in a squad and he refused because he didn't want no part in people telling him what to do. Yet that made a captain furious at him which Kade back away quickly from her. During some missions, Kade became cold and silent yet quickly enough he finished every mission to which some people couldn't do even the hardest and deadly missions. He would come back and not worry about the pain leaving some soul reapers to fear him. Still some of the captains wonder where he came from and why he refused joining both Division Two and Division Six squads. It was because of his anti-social attitude. During his training, Kade accomplish learning his shikai abilities of his zanpakuto which the first he felt the silence of a room while being alone. It was hard nut challenge actually it took months to master his shikai abilities but he wanted to learn bankai but people kept hassling him about missions and so it kept it busy and yet he couldn't fulfill that training yet.

During his time becoming a soul reaper, he just would exiled himself from the others and just train this was a problem because people wanted Kade to socialize with others. Kade refused to talk to anybody about his problems still he kept quiet and did his missions as best he could. Kade began becoming more then a lone shinigami still trying to avoid conservation to the point he never attended any meetings which the Soul society. Kade thought he should leave the Soul society his problems couldn't be helped at all then he walked away from the Soul society. He didn't want to end up in the maggot's nest so he somehow he would have risk leaving. He lefted the Soul society finally having enough time to completely keep his spiritual pressure hidden from everybody including the hollows. A full investigation of Kade Hiroshima was taken place within the Soul society wanted to know if he was still alive and if so why did he leave. Kade lefted the Soul society with a gigai intact hiding in Karakura town then taking a bus to Karakura City. He kept himself hidden underground when shortly arriving but years later the shinigami decided to start training. Kade started with some kidou abilities learning a just a few hado and only two bakudou kido powers. Luckily, Dr. Necker placed a book of kido lessons before his departure really it was simple to learn some kidou attacks like hado and bakudou. There was one short problem the book only instructions for both hado and bakudou up to 70. If they caused noise while training, he would hide somewhere else. Kade continued his kidou training along with increasing the power of his zanpakuto.

~Zanpakuto Information~

Blade Name: Myou Kyoukan (Dark Assassin)
Sealed Blade appearance: Carbon Steel "Blood Splash" Katana Zanpakuto with Black Scabbard. 26" black coated stainless steel blade with red paint splash, 10.75" black imitation ray skin handle with red cord wrapping, Silver blade collar ·Two tone metal guard
·36.75" overall length
Zanpaktou spirit: A demon witch with a long and mysterious harp that would be the best way to describe Myou Kyoukan. Myou is knowledgeable, analytical, easygoing, fairly compassionate (usually towards her friends), humorous in her own right, and exhibits a cheerful, energetic demeanor when Kade is around. Even though she doesn't have a serious attitude around Kade. She cares deeply for him thinking about what happen in his dark life some of the time. Hoping one day, he'll get the chance to see his parents again. However, Myou has a serious but calm attitude whenever, Kade wants to train with her into increasing her powers. She believes that her creator must be focued and and have the willpower while training with her. Truthfully, Myou wants to become a true passionate friend to Kade because he won't accept anybody else into his heart. She'll play her harp to show off some kind of peaceful mood that she's in.
Inner world Myou's spirit world is a burning forest. The Burning Forest is an immolated forest located in the spirit realm of Kade's zanpakuto. There is a great fire in the center of the forest, as well as numerous lava-emitting spores. There is no green vegetation in this forest whatsoever.

~Shikai Information~

Release Phrase: "Blood, darkness, come unto me! Myou Kyoukan"
Released blade appearance: The shikai of the sword known as Myou Kyoukan, has a form that suits it’s dark name. Taking the shape of large serrated scimitar roughly 5 feet in length and 3 inches in width. It bares considerable weight and adding momentum to it’s destructive potential. Along its dark steel sides are small designs of little white wisps of flames streaming all the way to where a hand-guard should be present. It’s handle is merely wrapped tightly together by a dark crimson fabric, with a metal ring roughly 4 inches in diameter severing as the pommel to this malicious weapon


~Shikai Techniques/Abilities~

Name of abilty/technique: Nenshousupea
Description: The blade will start to glow red and then six medium size fireballs will started circling around the sword. Then Kade will start to point at the opponent then one of the fireballs with reshaping itself into a medium sized spear and quickly attack the enemy in a devastating burning spearlike blast attack. It had range 75 feet almost like a modified targeted fire arrow but the downsize about it is it needs to be shot just right for th impact to hit with accuracy. It feels like a shape punch to gut when one of these spears hit the enemy. To stronger enemies it feels like a pinching stab attack.
Duration: 1 Post
Cool Down: 2 posts
Preparation: 4 Posts

Name of abilty/technique: Nenshoukobushi
Description: The sword will dissapear and in it place will appear a red gauntlet will start burning allowing for a strong fire punch to his enemy this attack allow him to plan ahead to catch the enemy off guard with his burning fist. So he can do something better later...the only problem is he can only this technique three times in battle because of strong pressure from the fist. This attack is very strong which required much spiritual pressure to make accuracy of the fist hit the opponent. It feel like a hot burning 300 degrees melting iron to weaker opponents but a strong hot punch to stronger opponents.
Duration: 2 posts
Cool Down: 1 post
Preparation: 1 Post

~Other Techniques~
Swordsmanship: After some hardship and immense training procedures,Kade learn many skills of the shikai of the zanpakuto. It's isn't like a captain swordsmenship but it intermediate and getting better. He still trying to learn the power of bankai even though training is difficult to do it his situation.
Shunpo: He's had advanced vice's captain's level speed but still no match then a captain's or even an espada's speed.
Hand to hand: Kade is an advanced hand to hand combatant
Kido: Kade understand the very basic and intermediate offensive & defensive kidou. From training he had mastered Bakudou #1 - 39 easy enough. He had learned Hadou #1-63. It the advanced higher and unknown kido that are the bigger problems for because it was fobidden for him to learn them.

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~Other Information Reiji carries around weapons with his zanpakuto, a reiatsu shotgun, and wooden sword. Brass knuckles The reiatsu shotgun was a fable weapon which he created in his spare time inside Squad 12 facility. it like a pump shotgun. The shotgun can fire a reiatsu bullet which can stun a person's leg making it difficult to move with automatic reloading which take 2 posts to reload.

~Rp Sample~
The guy was having trouble sleeping...
Reiji was having nightmares again still he couldn't understand what they meant maybe it was all the experimentation that he went through over the years. He was fearing that most of his memories were not his and that they belong to someone else. He remembers a human by the name Balzar Shadirath who was maybe similiar to Soi Fon but a medum size elf midget. Dark Balzar and then he shook Balzar's hand and then Balzar started waking up from his dream then Haji started clapping yet telling him that he just passed the first part of the test. Haji told Balzar that his temptation of the soul training was completed that the dark reiatsu was within his system now. Yet that Haji summoned of his disciples to join them then somebody started walking to them. Haji called him Taimak yey this was goigng to be Balzar's training partner for the beginning of this training. He gave up all friendship to learn this ancient evil power so their was no turning back for him now. Balzar started getting into a fighting stance and Taimak finally got into his fighting stance too. This was going to be a hard battle as the student started charging directly at the young warrior using hammering blows and hitting him on his backside. Balzar punched Taimak in the face throwing the guy to the ground but the ninja was back to his feet using some judo kicks knocking the young warrior to the ground. Rage started building up with the young warrior he wanted to kicks this guy's ass and then he charged at Taimak. He started to mount himself doing some hard punching to the student's face and started using this into something like a combo. Taimak kicked off Balzar allowing himself to fire some fireball attacks directly at the young warrior and balzar tried dodging. Haji shook his head alerting Balzar to stop and then he wonders why as Taimak's attack struck Balzar's backside. Something he wasn't expecting and then Haji appraoch Balzar hoping to give him some direction. He told him in order for his evil power to work he must endure some pain, Balzar didn't think much of it at the time but still he wanted this power. Haji thought Balzar needed enough pain in order to draw out the first form of this power the reiatsu and the user must be angry. Then he thought the pillars of fire would be the best way to summon out the first form. Balzar was instructed to sit down and endure the pain then the young warrior started to sit down. Then for some reason it started to get hot and Balzar didn't like it but Haji told him to sit back down and take the pain. The guy gave a dirty look to Balzar but however the young warrior sat back at the heat was becoming harder and hotter on his body. Then his muscles started to ache a bit then he started feeling a weird sensation within his reiatsu. Haji knew his body was ready and then he asked Balzar to bring forth the child of darkness bring him and his reiatsu out into the open. Balzar slowly started to meditate returning into his dream state and then saw that Dark Balzar was gone. But somebodye else took his place and then the guy looked angry yet he started looking around until he sees Balzar. The teenager started getting up and drawing his sword directly but Balzar started to realize who this kid was something from the technique he was learning maybe he was a dark part of him. Balzar started alkign over the teenager seeing what he was wanting and why was his hair on fire. The teenager wanted to know his own name and then he started getting a headache but then he started looking at Balzar thinking he was the enemy. The teenager started grabbing his flame sword and he looked pretty cool but this guy was angry. He started using his flame sword and Balzar blocked his attack with his amerasu flame sword wondering what happen the guy wanted to know his name. He started attacking Balzar quickly and sharp thrusts with his black sword and then he manages to trip Balzar as the young warrior started to loose his footing. Balzar got back on point and started attacking the guy with his own flame sword but the guy was quicker then Balzar realized. Balzar managed to touch him but he started feeling his hand burning and then quickly he backs away trying to cool down his hand. The flame teenager started charging looking angry then Balzar smack his head thinking he remembers this guy. Then the flame teenager started charging at him as Balzar looked at the flame teenager and then he said his name. Balzar called him Necro then the teenager stops feeling his headache was gone and seeming more calm then before. He lowers his sword feeling a bit better but he draws his sword at Balzar saying this wasn't over that he must take on three challenges before achieving Haji's acceptance and the power of the Satsui no Hado. Necro was first challenge and now that he knew his name Balzar would have to fight him and then the teenager got ready attacking Balzar with some swift movements and then Balzar kept blocking with his flame sword. Balzar started to noctice the speed on this guy and yet this person was a part of him, he calms down and continues fighting this flame teenager. Then the guy started using a flame technique which Balzar never heard of before and then flames started coming out like a machine gun. Balzar knew now that he would have to fight him as he was running for cover the flame teenager started looking for him. Balzar was in hiding and then he started remembering his training that he would have to embrace his dark side. Finally the flame teenager found him and slash Balzar directly in the leg which Balzar finally decided to give up his friendship to some of his friends and embrace his dark side. It wasn't easy for him just to say goodbye to everything he cared deeply about but then his red eyes started glowing. He attacked the flame teenager, Balzar embraced the dark reiatsu attacking the flame teenager in a rage. The flame teenager started backing away attacking balzar with the same attack from before but Balzar actually dodged the attack with some quick reflexes from his years of judo training. He managed to punch the guy directly in the face but the flames were burning his hand yet again. Balzar remembers Haji talking about pain that he must endure but then he grabs the flame sword within his other hand and then starts to pierce the teenager's stomach forcing it through. Then Necro looks at Balzar saying the lesson was and that the temptation of the soul training was complete. The last part of the training was for Balzar to accept Necro to become as one. Balzar thought long and hard about this and then talked about people pushing him around when he was a child and he taked about with Necro on his side that people won't talk about him anymore. Balzar again talked about every hero has a dark side and Necro was just the beginning. Necro started looking at Balzar thinking that he was kina crazy but he must have a reason for creating him. Kade wakes up in cold sweat yelling yet hoping to wonder if he was once Balzar maybe it was a fragment to his past or something of a warning which he needed to watch out for.

Xiaomu started jumping on the bed hoping to wake him up but she sees that he was awoke maybe he was having bad dream again an needed some help. She asked if he was having that dream again and he nods, Kade told Xiaomu that maybe just myabe that he was once human and that these nightmares were fragment of his past. He does remember being human and receiving something evil and it was training maybe to become evil, Kade started crying he didn't want this is was a horrible memory. Xiaomu started rubbing his back hoping to calm him down telling him that everything was goign to be alright that it was just a memory nothing more.

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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:20 am

Hi, first of all i want to address the former shinigami part.

It is stated in the list of available ranks that in order to apply for a former shinigami that you must pm me and negociate the characters history etc. We are only ever going to allow a set number of former shinigami on the site at any time so thats why we take it seriously.

So if you could pm me with the reasons you wish to have a former shinigami and why you think this character should be allowed to be one that would be good.

Until we have sorted out if he can in fact be a former shinigami then i wont look at the rest of the app ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:18 pm

Alright since you spoke to me about the rank i will now look at the abilities etc ^^

What do you mean his 6th division rank was never known? he had to have a rank....

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Name of abilty/technique: Nenshousupea
Description: The blade will start to glow red and then six medium size fireballs will started circling around the sword. Then Kade will start to point at the opponent then one of the fireballs with reshaping itself into a medium sized spear and quickly attack the enemy in a devastating burning spearlike blast attack. It had range 75 feet almost like a modified targeted fire arrow but the downsize about it is it needs to be shot just right for th impact to hit with accuracy. This can produce extreme damage to an enemy when shot correctly if isn't shot correctly then several damage will be done. It feels like a shape punch to gut when one of these spears hit the enemy. To stronger enemies it feels like a pinching stab attack.
Duration: 1 Post
Cool Down: 2 posts
Preparation: 3 Posts
So he gets 6 to shoot every 2 posts? o.O also when you say extremem damage please elaborate, it seems to contradict what you say afterwards.

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Name of abilty/technique: Nenshoukobushi
Description: The sword will dissapear and in it place will appear a red gauntlet will start burning allowing for a strong fire punch which knock his enemy senseless this attack allow him to plan ahead to catch the enemy off guard with his burning fist. So he can do something better later...the only problem is he can only this technique three times in battle because of strong pressure from the fist. This attack is very strong which required much spiritual pressure to make accuracy of the fist hit the opponent. It feel like a hot burning 300 degrre iron to weaker opponents but a strong hot punch to stronger opponents.
Duration: 2 posts
Cool Down: 1 post
Preparation: 1 Post
when you say knock his enemy senseless are you just saying that for effect or are you meaning it xD

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After some hardship and immense training procedures, Kade had master his zanpakuto blade to his full potential. He's learned many tricks & styles that even an captain of those vizards would know.
I doubt it, he cant have mastered it to his full potential as he doesnt have bankai xD but yeah i doubt that whole quote actually

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Shunpo: He trained constantly with his shunpo speeds. Really this was the first thing he trained for being faster then a vizard. He was improved his shunpo speeds to become faster then even a vice captain. He able to dodge attacks or appear behind/ in front of a person with his fast speed.
Seems to me your trying to make him good at everything...he is not 2nd division so he would not have trained for this first of all, he would be advanced vice captain level at the most. I wouldnt use vizards as an example here.

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Hand to hand: Without his zanpakuto, Kade had learned to master unarmed combat at full potential the best weapons would be his hands. He has good boxing & Jiu jitsu styles which took months every art of hand to hand combat in offense techniques and defense techniques
Saying he knows all styles and is a master of them is too much, just say he is advanced in hand to hand combat. That is all you really need to say.

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Kido: He had learn about every defensive kido there is He had problems using hado kidou
There would be some he could not know, and some levels he could not perform at his current Strength.

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Other Information Reiji carries around weapons with his zanpakuto, a reiatsu shotgun and wooden sword.
O.k the wooden sword is self explainatory xD but the shotgun? please elaborate, it will most likely need cooldowns etc but first tell me about it.

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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:53 am

I did the re-editing on the bio
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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:56 am

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Name of abilty/technique: Nenshousupea
Description: The blade will start to glow red and then six medium size fireballs will started circling around the sword. Then Kade will start to point at the opponent then one of the fireballs with reshaping itself into a medium sized spear and quickly attack the enemy in a devastating burning spearlike blast attack. It had range 75 feet almost like a modified targeted fire arrow but the downsize about it is it needs to be shot just right for th impact to hit with accuracy. It feels like a shape punch to gut when one of these spears hit the enemy. To stronger enemies it feels like a pinching stab attack.
Duration: 1 Post
Cool Down: 2 posts
Preparation: 1 Posts
So there is 6 that he can fire yes? if so i think the cooldown should be longer not by alot but maybe 3-4 posts. Or if you want the cooldown to remain small then a limit on how many he can shoot off per post then? or any ideas you have or your thoughts on it i always welcome them ^^

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Other Information Reiji carries around weapons with his zanpakuto, a reiatsu shotgun and wooden sword. The reiatsu shotgun was a fable weapon which he created in his spare time inside Squad 12 facility. it like a pump shotgun. The shotgun can fire a reiatsu bullet which can stun/paralyze a person with automatic reloading which take 2 posts to reload.

O.k so the gun can fire 1 bullet before it must reload which takes 2 posts? (just making sure i understand it all) i dont like that it would stun/paralyze a person, maybe it could stun the area it hits? like the leg gets hit and the leg is stunned? or something along those lines, they might be able to still move it to some degree but it would be hindered.


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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Sat Mar 26, 2011 12:16 am

Okay I've done some more fixing again Laughing
Hoping a fugitive can roleplay here...
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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:31 am

Im not sure what you mean by hope a fugitive can roleplay here? o.o anyway xD the handguns dont make sense, the way you have worded it has me thinking you missed out a few words. Also why does he carry around so many weapons? he has knives and regular handguns ? whats the point? in order to carry everything you say he has with him he would need a trailer xD lol

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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:06 pm

got rid of it the guns but I just wanted some protection.
But is the bio ok now
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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:39 pm

Lightning said it was ok for a have rogue shinigami being hunted by the soul society that what I meant by that Orihime
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PostSubject: Re: Kade Hiroshima   Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:28 pm

Approved ^^

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