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PostSubject: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:42 am

Shinigami Application



~Basic~

Name: Hona Hona
Alias/Nickname: Honest Hona
Actual Age: 663
Physical Age: 15
Gender: Female
Division: Ex - 13th Captain
Rank: Captain Level

~Appearance~

Height:5' 6"
Weight: 117 lbs
Eye Color: Grey
Hair Color/Style: short and spiky, kind of an icy blue, arcs over the right side of her face.
Complexion: Fair
Any distinguishing features: A tattoo of your face (the words) on her ass
A tattoo of the number 13 with a line through it on her left breast
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~Personality~

Personality: Very forgetful about things she does not want. Very angry alot of the time, and can taok her way out of just about any situation. She can be kind, is loyal, honourable, and prefers to be around men more than women, to hang out at least Wink. Can be a bitch. Often selfish and not very trusting. She has a short fuse and is quick to temper. She jokes around a lot and is quite sarcastic, Very huggy. Becomes very touchy when intoxicated. Never bluffs and is very violent but often appears to be a pacifist.
Sexuality: Lesbian
Relationship Status: Single
Quirks: - She is turned on by the sight on someone bleeding
- Always has a sucker in her mouth
- Prone to violent visions of her past

History:

Hona died young as a human. Unable to achieve anything in her life. Her and her mother were out for a walk when Hona and her mother were killed by bandits and then their bodies raped and looted.

Once she reached the soul society Hona was dead set on being a shinigami, but no one would take her serious because of her youth. That is until she found an oversized sword in the woods one day and began to wield it like it was made for her. After learning how to use her sword fighting off the evil that lived in Zaraki, she decided to charge the Soul society. Challenging one of the door guards to a fight to prove herself. She was winning, her strength for her size overpowered even the giant. But she did not win, she dissapeared and snuck past him without him noticing. After sneaking around and hunting down the Captian commander, she petitioned him to take her in as a shinigami. He asked how she got in and she told him his security needed work, then he put two and two together. He told her she already was one, but needed to attend a special school before she can become official.

In the Academy, she was a terror with a flaring temper. Her massive strength putting down all men who tried to take advantage of her. She graduated at teh normal pace and was drafted into the 11th division. Where she made a name for herself as Honest Hona, the girl who made no bluffs. Before she even reached a seated rank she was drafted into the 5th division. She reached the rank of luitenant and held the position for years. Until she was asked to take the captians exam. Even now she only had the looks of a 13 year old. She passed and was given the position of Captian of the 13th division.

One day she was on a mission, after holding teh position after a steady 8 decades, in the human world and was plagued with amnsesia and fell into a coma. Hona was brought back to the Soul society and hospitalized for a week before regaining coniencness.

Afterwards she was unable to keep her duties as a captian with no knowledge of her previous years other than the skills she knew. Another took her place as she was put into an unseated position until her memory came back. She at that time had the mentality of a 6 year old(but the looks of a 15 year old), and could not gain a seat of power until her memory came back.

She very slowly progressed in age. It seemed on a set path that she would regain her memories when she reached the physical and mental age of that when she got amnesia. This would be a long time. Still, she insisted on going into battle's despite her age, With a powerful Zanpakuto and bankai she had her own personal squad in the 13th division. Not to lead but a batallion of at least 40 men to look over her so she did not destroy everything and lose control. Something that happened once and they did not want to happen again. Especially Byakuya, who had the displeasure of stopping her rampage.

After 30 years and no progress she was suddenly plagued with visions of people dying and the battles she had fought. She was brought to many doctors and even exorsists. No one in the soul society could help her. Even the greatest mind's of teh soul society could figure out nothing. It seemed like she had average amnesia on a biological scale but it was not the case anymore.

Before a certain mission they were especially bad but she told no one, going on teh mission anyway. With her as teh powerhouse of the squad they depended on her to fight off the bulk of it, like the pricks they were, but she could not fight. It was a slaughter of the men as she ran away. No survivors and she was just assumed dead. So she ran away to the human world to find someone to end her pain in her desperation. Yamamoto and the other captains believed she was killed in hollow attack. They have heard nothing about her since, 200 years ago.

~Zanpakuto Information~

Blade Name: Sutōkā ga suki
Sealed Blade appearance: A seven foot long icy blue katana, that has a button inside the base of it's hilt which allows it to break off at multiple points to extend to twice it's length and be used as a whip. Usually hidden inside a guitar case.
Zanpaktou spirit: A reflection of Hona's personality, but much more timid. Where Hona would flip out on someone, she would kindly ask them to cease.
Inner world A world made completely of an endless crystalized sea. With crystalized waves frozen in place all over. A beautiful sight.

~Shikai Information~

Release Phrase: Crystalize the world
Released blade appearance: Her sword gains many medium sized sickle like appendages along it. Also adding another three feet on to the blade. The blade itself becomes a deep purple color. Nothing else changes about the blade.


~Shikai Techniques/Abilities~ (seated officers can have 1-2 shikai abilities depending on the strength of those abilities, Lieutenants can have 2 of considerable strength, and Captains can have 3 powerful ones. )

Name of abilty/technique: Crystal Heart
Description: Hona's sword is coated in a weightless crystal, that can only break if she will's it. She can control this crystal's momentum when she holds the blade. Allowing her to use it's whip like form like it was another limb and making her swings faster and more powerful by forcing momentum upon it. Up to a 2x increase in strength and speed of the weapons swing (not her actual strenght and speed)
Duration: 6 posts
Cool Down:4 posts
Preparation: N/A

Name of abilty/technique: Crystalized love
Description: Hona can fire crystal spikes from her sword from the sickle appendages and the tip at great speed. Each spike is the size a foot long and three inches thick. When they hit something powerful enough to stop them then then shatter sending shards of crystal flying everywhere. Can fire up to 5 a post.
Duration: 3 posts
Cool Down: 2 posts
Preparation: N/a

Name of abilty/technique: Crystals that reflect the soul
Description: Hona forms a crystal clone of her opponent out of her sword. It's physical abilities reflect that of Hona but only at 45%, but it takes large amounts of spiritual energy to create. Once formed it can do nothing but attack it's designated opponent.
Duration:N/A
Cool Down: 8 posts
Preparation:4 posts

~Bankai~(Captains only) (no more than 3 abilities)

Bankai Appearance/spirit manifestation: The blade of her shikai falls off the hilt and crystal forms around it and grows out from it into a large crystal dragon. The tip of the tail is where the sword resides. It is controlled by the Zanpakuto spirit as that is it's true manifestation.



~Bankai Techniques/Abilities~

Name: Cystalized Hilt control
Description: As long as Hona holds the hilt of her zanpakuto she can control crystal. The hilt becomes covered in crystal and forms around her hand into a type of glove that she cannot move in. Same happens to her feet to just above her ankles, making mobility hard.
Duration: Passive
Cool Down: N/A
Preparation: N/A

Name of abilty/technique: Crystal Pike
Description: Hona can summon a spike of crystal from the ground, growing to forty stories high.
Duration: N/A
Cool Down: 8 posts
Preparation: N/A

Name of abilty/technique: Crystals that reflect the soul V 2.0
Description: Hona forms a crystal clone of her opponent out of her sword. It's physical abilities reflect that of Hona but only at 45%, but it takes large amounts of spiritual energy to create. Once formed it can do nothing but attack it's designated opponent. In this secondary form of the ability the crystal clone 'speaks' to the person it was cloned of. The clone as it is a reflection of them, knows all about them and exploits that, pushing thier buttons and speaking what they know but are too weak to admit. Or just twisting the truth of what happened to hurt them. Hona can hear none of this and is actually oblivious to this affect of the clone. Only the clonee can hear it.
Duration:N/A
Cool Down: 8 posts
Preparation:4 posts


~Other Techniques~
Swordsmanship: Advanced
Shunpo: Advanced
Hand to hand: intermediate
Kido: Advanced
Others:
~Other Information~(Could be additional weapons or anything else you like use to know)
Extremely Strong
All crystals are at a base, as strong as a zanpakuto in sealed form.


~Rp Sample~

The Grand tree was massive, Its twisting old truck almost humming with power. The multitudes of plant life growing from it and around it, only adding to its beauty. Iy was in a circular arena of pillars, seemed to deem this a priased place. Serenity could be heard in this place of peace. It was usually not alone with itself, but today is had only one visitor. The calm winds blowing through his hair.

Hona stood infront of the Grand tree, staring up at its might and beauty. She had her thumbs hooked in the belt of her kimono.. She clikced her teeth as she wondered about this new job.

As she looked up at the tree she wondered abot the 290 years she has been alive. She heard footstepd in the backround but he did not turn. A couple nearby small pebble's floated off the ground for a second, then fell. She then looked back and saw the person then looked forward again, " This new position. It has many responsibilities. I am still only a child. Do you think I will do good? Despite my wisdom. "


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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:44 am

ill love over your profile in a min but Woo for the pic do you know what its from
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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:45 am

the picture is a realistic portrait of the character from Rosario Vampire :p

Also we generally dont do ex-captains etc unless you pm me and have a good reason as to why she is no longer captain etc also when you say ex-captain, she is still loyal to the Soul society?

so pm with your ideas/reasons on why she is ex-captain and we will see if she can be ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:00 pm

Mizore is awesome... Of course i knew it was her when I picked it

Also I left it out of the Pm but she still loyal in a way. Not an enemy, but helps them out in her own way.
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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:46 am

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Any distinguishing features: A tattoo of your face on her ass

Errrrr? huh? xD

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Name of abilty/technique: Crystal Heart
Description: Hona's sword is coated in a weightless crystal, that can only break if she will's it. She can control this crystal's momentum when she holds the blade. Allowing her to use it's whip like form like it was another limb and making her swings faster and more powerful by forcing momentum upon it.
Duration: 6 posts
Cool Down:2 posts
Preparation: N/A
It makes her sword swings more powerful and faster? how much? can you explain a bit more detailed for me ^^

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Name of abilty/technique: Crystalized love
Description: Hona can fire crystal spikes from her sword from the sickle appendages and the tip at great speed. Each spike is the size a foot long and three inches thick. When they hit something powerful enough to stop them then then shatter sending shards of crystal flying everywhere.
Duration: N/A
Cool Down:N/A
Preparation: N/a
how strong are the spikes? And how many can she make per post? there has to be a limit and i am sure you can see why ^^

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Name of abilty/technique: Crystals that reflect the soul
Description: Hona forms a crystal clone of her opponent out of her sword. It's physical abilities reflect that of Hona, but it takes large amounts of spiritual energy to create. Once formed it can do nothing but attack it's designated opponent.
Duration:N/A
Cool Down: 8 posts
Preparation:4 posts
I need more information on what this clone can and cant do, how strong is it? (what would break it etc)

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Name: Cystalized Hilt control
Description: As long as Hona holds the hilt of her zanpakuto she can control crystal. The hilt becomes covered in crystal and forms around her hand into a type of glove that she cannot move in.
Duration: Passive
Cool Down: N/A
Preparation: N/A
Any crystal? maybe i read this wrong xD

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Name of abilty/technique: Crystal Pike
Description: Hona can summon a spike of crystal from the ground, growing to forty stories high.
Duration: N/A
Cool Down: 8 posts
Preparation: N/A
Thats errrr HUGE, also how wide or large in diameter is it?

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Name of abilty/technique: Crystals that reflect the soul V 2.0
Description: Hona forms a crystal clone of her opponent out of her sword. It's physical abilities reflect that of Hona, but it takes large amounts of spiritual energy to create. Once formed it can do nothing but attack it's designated opponent. In this secondary form of the ability the crystal clone 'speaks' to the person it was cloned of. The clone as it is a reflection of them, knows all about them and exploits that, pushing thier buttons and speaking what they know but are too weak to admit. Or just twisting the truth of what happened to hurt them. Hona can hear none of this and is actually oblivious to this affect of the clone. Only the clonee can hear it.
Duration:N/A
Cool Down: 8 posts
Preparation:4 posts
I dont mind this but it needs the same info that the last one needed, also just so you know it might be hard to get this information to use against the people xD but like i said i dont mind it.




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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Thu Mar 24, 2011 4:45 pm


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1. The words your face

2. I would say if I have to give a max increase of about 10x. SInce she can control teh momentum of it she can therefore make her swings faster and therefore hit harder

3. The spikes are about 3x as strong as a Zanpakuto.

4. About 37 per post.

5. The crystal clone can only do physical attacks with teh physical abilities of Hona. It has the same strength as the spikes.

6. Yes, any crystal...

7. I know... that is why it has such a huge cool down... About forty feet in diameter at its base

8. Same as the previous one, they get no stronger, but just gain that ability. I also know... I understsand it may be difficult.

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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:25 pm

oh lol the words 'your face' xD hahahah you might want to make that clearer in your app because i was confused :p

* unfortunately 10x is FAR too much for a boost, i normally only allow a maximum of 2x and only if the duration is small to medium and the cooldown balances out.

* i think a suitable power level for the spikes would be of a bala or cero, if bala then she could have a max of 2 fired per post if as strong as a cero then a max of 1 per post. That still allows her to be firing things each post without a cooldown. Arrancars have cooldowns on cero etc so you can see that it is an advantage here.

* O.k so they can attack physically only, they would have to be weaker in strength then Hona herself though to be fair. Also since they are made of crystal i dont see why strong enough blows couldn't shatter it such as shikai or bankai etc. Also what is the longest that the clone could remain out for?

* Alright so she can control any crystal, not being able to move is a nice equaliser. But i do wonder where she would get the crystal to use? crystal is not something you see often in nature ^^ im just trying to understand how this ability would work

* o.k so if my math is right then that is about 12-13metres in diameter? if so then that's o.k ^^

So if you could add in the needed information into the app i think we are just about done ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:14 pm

1. I am fine with 2x

2. They are more like balas than ceros... its chucking crystal spikes at you... not an energy attack so I find comparing hard...

3. Can it be 7 per post of 5 per post... they re spikes... not large attacks... so they are not all that powerful...

4. how about 75% of her physical stats?

5. The point of teh massive crystal spike is to make a steayd amount fo crystal to use

6. They should not be easy to shatter since they are denser than a zanpakuto... but they are destroyable

7. The clone itself has no duration as it does not need to be sustained
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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:11 am

* O.k so the added strength and speed that the crystal adds to her swong is a maximum of 2x i would like the cooldown to be longer in that case. Maybe 4 posts. It is important that you realise it isn't a boost to stats so to speak or her overall strength, it is just to the swing of her blade.

* ahh i see, so they are no more than shards that could be deflected or shattered etc? If that is the case then yes i will allow 5 per post, however i am afraid that the more i think of it i think we need to set the ability out this way. (numbers are examples only)

Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts

That would mean she could fire 5 per post for 3 posts before having to cooldown for 3 posts, just an example.

* well with the clones, we either have to make them weaker or give them a maximum duration that they can remain out for. That way it keeps the battle more fair, Lightning my character has 3 clones but they are pretty weak and they have a duration. So its up to you how you want to play that one ^^

* ahh i see so the crystal from that spike is what she will use, part of me can see how allowing her to do anything with it might be seen as op'd but i would be trusting you not to go crazy with it. (you know what i mean hopefully, like don't send hundreds of shards at an enemy that has no chance to dodge them, etc) otherwise i would had have to get the ability more regulated down the line if complaints happen ^^. So she cannot move at all while in this mode? i want to be clear and understand it.

* if the clones were going to be that hard/dense then i would say she would have to be sustaining them some how....

(btw overall i love the character ^^))

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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:56 pm

1. I understand

2.I understand

3.I guess I shall make them weaker, 50% 40%?

4. Thank you and I would not. But she can move in this mode, But her right arm is immovable. If that is not fien I am good with her not moving,

5. Thank you! I worked really on her !
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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:41 am

O.k 45% for the clones is fine ^^ i would prefer there be some other weakness than just she cannot move her right hand while in that mode since otherwise it seems a bit unbalanced. Whether you want to come up with something or if you just want to make it that her feet also become encased in crystal and she cant move that is up to you ^^

So if you make all the needed addition and changes then it should be all good to go Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:39 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hona Hona, the Ex-captain of the 13th division   Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:24 am

o.k ^^ i made one tiny edit to the strength of the crystal you had stated under other information, if you disagree with it then you can pm me and we can always make edits ^^ i just thought it would be better to get the app approved so you can rp and what not instead of talking about that.

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