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PostSubject: Yuushi Touki - DUN   Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:19 am

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~Basic~

Name: Yuushi Touki
Alias/Nickname: Burning Spirit, Idiot's Fire, Bloody Dragon
Age: 16
Gender: Male

~Appearance~

Height: 5 ft 8 in
Weight: 163 lb.
Eye Color: Coal, Sunny Red (When Power Activates)
Hair Color/Style: Jet Black; Wild Style & Spiky
Complexion: Tan
Distinguishing features: None

Personality


Personality:
The personification of a red-blooded male, who hates to give-in to anything other than his own will and loves to prove his own worth by his actions. An "actions speak louder than words type of person", he attacks before he talks and often exceeds his words with his actions taking the initiative to do something rather than waiting for it to happen. Often he is considered wild, he is very hot-tempered and strong on his emotional strength than his thought process and is a reliable person when it comes to trying his hardest to do anything. He hates to be kept waiting for anything and will complain about someone being late for whatever purpose they were, and afterward mumble about it to himself.

He is someone that sees himself as a "protector", someone who protects the innocent people of the school of Karakura, though most see him as a bully because of his rash violent actions anyone that actually knows him sees him as an "idiot with a large spirit". He takes it upon himself to choose his own decisions and never let anyone else choose for him, if given two unpleasant options, he will try and think of a third one by himself. Though, he is very rash, he is intelligent, and thinks on the short term rather than long term, giving him an adaptive mind, he also can't lie very well because he hates liars or lying and is usually very honest to himself and others.

He thinks in a straight-forward, gong-ho manner, and thinks that those who fight learn more about each other than just talking (obviously this doesn't work on most women...), and thinks that if you talk, you're just learning words when you can express through your fists. Usually in suggestive situations with females, he is seen blushing, or taken very off-guard being mistaken as a "pervert". When something stays on his mind, he usually lingers on it, such as taking the long way home, going to the arcade, or going into one of the sports clubs/athletic facilities, and training with them. After a fierce battle, he usually screams loudly, like a dragon's roar, the reason why he is called "Bloody Dragon".
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Relationship status: Single
Quirks: Usually is very blunt in his words. Doesn't follow plans at all, and does his own thing.
History:
Born within Okinawa, Yuushi always had a deep connection with the spirits around him, always excited to find things around him, and take on challenges even as a young man, he was taken back by the outlook of spirits at first, as he couldn't really see them, but talked to them as if they were his imaginary friends. At school he was known as weird, got into fights at school and would soon be picked on and bullied by those around him, during one of these bully sessions, after watching a fighting anime the night before, he had seen a hot-blooded fighter and acted like him, throwing a punch with all his might, knocking him into the floor with his fist. This would be only the beginning.

He had craved the ability to be strong and thus after school would always fight with his peers, and get into lots of trouble because of it. He took it upon himself to attack before talking, and would try to imitate anime and such with his body, doing "special attacks". His reputation had grown as he had grown to become older, until he was within middle school where his parents prompted to move after his last incident. He would go into a school within Karakura. The same cycle would begin, and he would start to gain a deeper reputation.

Once in Karakura High, he would lead on through his freshman year, and become a sophomore, fight after fight his strength grew, he began to fight with the sports teams, in order to gain more ability and tact, and thus he would "train" his body further. Increase his ability to take and increase the ability to give. Within one of these fights, he would be named as "Bloody Dragon" because of his loud scream and the blood across the ground. He would also become a bancho for his school, but did not abuse his power only protecting the weak if they deserved to be help (standing up for themselves, fixing their own problems why he took care of the situation), though he could not stand bullying, he knew people had to fight their own battles.

Within the beginning of his sophomore year, his powers had mature more so than they did before, in Okinawa, because of the huge concentration of spiritual particles in the air of the town, it was much more robust and great. He took forth this with regret at first, but then started to notice even more signatures, much more hulking presences than the spirits. Loud screeches, unexplained whispers around him, and shimmering heat signatures of the creatures. They were Hollows.

The power would grow so much, he would be able to see the creatures, meaning he would have enough power to summon them to himself without him knowing, yet why was it happening either way. During his first actual battle, he would begin to take heavy blows and wounds on his body, yet after activating a power at the eleventh hour, he would heal (his clothes not so lucky), and he would use a punch he had been instinctual using all the time. At that point in time, he would call his power Kiai, and the punch he had done Kiaihou, and thus, a new advent human was born.

~Special Ability~

Name: Fighting Spirit - Kiai
Descriptions:
The base of his abilities and his most primary method of attack so far. The ability of gaining flame-like spirit energy over his hands, his forehead and his feet that have a bright red color, much like flames. However, these aren't true flames, as they don't burn, but produce a lot of force and are considered a spiritual energy that feels "warm" but isn't truly "hot". The user of this ability gains an overall increase in physical ability and also the power to produce great pressure from the body part that strikes the opponents body. This ability is not truly a technique, yet the innate ability the user has, and is a manifestation of their strength of will and as such, their greater their will the more their flames glow, and the more power that releases. (Extending forth, their maximum level of battle strength shall always be what level of ability they are, and thus the flames growth are more aesthetics than actual weight of their strength.)

As of now, the users strength can only bring out this ability when something critically dangerous comes about and he is in dire need as he has yet to grasp his full ability to use the technique. The flames can also protect the hands and feet from sharp blades and spiritual attacks.
Duration: Innate until willpower is lowered, the user is unconscious or the battle ends.
Preparation: None.
Cooldown: None.

Name: Guts Cannon - Kiaihou
Descriptions:
A technique Yuushi has had even before he had the Kiai ability but decided to name it after his first unleashing of it. Yuushi focuses all his strength into his fist, making his fist clench tighter, so much so that his muscles flex and become slightly bigger, he will then punch straightforward, this attack normally was enough to easily knock-out other humans who were twice his size. With the great strength increase, he was able to knock both a Hollow and destroy a small building with his tremendous strength. This is his signature attack.
Duration: 1 post.
Preparation: 1 post.
Cooldown: 3 posts.

Name: Guts Blitz - Kiaisattou
Descriptions:
A technique Yuushi utilizes on an emphasize in speed, he quickly attacks the opponent with a barrage of punches that are exceptionally fast and come at different angles. However, the quickness sacrifices the great power Yuushi possesses and so he usually does this to capture an opponent or dispatch weaker enemies in one-go. The speed of which it is done, makes it seem like afterimages of the fist are moving forward, however faster opponents can see that their are still only two fists(obviously). At this level, he can do twenty punches in ten seconds.
Duration: 1-2 posts.
Preparation: 1 post.
Cooldown: 2 post.

~Other Information~
Having the ability to fight so well was wrought from being able to adapt to situations and as such he is a natural fighter, and athlete able to excel in many physical tasks and adapt to many situations in physical combat making him accustomed to changing tides. He also has a mixture of many styles and attacks seen from anime, manga, video games, real life and anything else that he can use.

~Rp Sample~
Taking the long winded path from school to home, bored Yuushi with the least delightful of his two conundrums, he was hungry and he was sad. The fact was, he had no time to truly think about the ways he could improve his fighting ability, as he had never actually "trained" before, his innate strength came from copying and doing, his straightforward nature showed this fully, his hands came to a halt as he touched against a tree, and watched it. He was strong because of his ability to survive, battles were everyday, since he was a lone banchou, someone who had great charisma and also "ran" the school with an iron fist. He was indeed someone that was strong, didn't really care about protecting the school only the people that he considered innocent in various situations of bullying, blackmail and such.

He took his fist into his hand, and with a powerful straight punch, his fist breaking through the wooden substance with ease, making a fist print. His hand began to bleed, as he watched the cuts of dagger wood chippings over it, took his time and placed his hand on his head and rubbed his hair backwards through his wrappings. He took in a deep sigh, leaned his head forward to the tree and frowned. Suddenly, he was pushed into the tree by his head, and taken forth greatly inducing a mild stage of pain into his face, as he heard laughter from behind.

"Stupid, you already had your face ready for us to smash, hm?"

It was the Kurosawa School again, idiots ready to face him for what he did just last week, really and truly they had been messing with one girl, made him angry and he kicked their asses so badly, he made them cry. Not so hard to admit however, he enjoyed doing so, he was mad because he couldn't get a new game on his current problems, and showed it through fists to the face and likely through a big smile on his face. Grasped by the neck, and punched into the ground by the largest one of the group, more laughter had came through the seeming stupid airways of these three buffoons.

"Pick him up boys, I need to speak to him eye to eye..."

They grasped his arms, and stood him up, his eyes opened towards the obvious leader of the group, his fists weren't clenched because he wasn't really and truly mad at this situation. People were always trying to get on his bad side, because he "ruled the school", and so he developed a good tolerance for taking a beating, to the point where he could take a non-defended haymaker from an opponent and get up still with a happy smirk. The man began to talk, as Yuushi's eyes gazed into the dirt.

"We've been searching for you all day, Touki, you mess with the Hitachi brothers and you fuck with the wrong guys..."

He grasped his cheek in the palms of his hand and gripped it fiercely as he chuckled, pushing his chin up with a depraved laugh. Now, Touki was getting angry, he shouldn't of done something so stupid, he was already aggravated of not knowing how to activate his ability but also not having the respect of three people trying to gang on him. He would have to teach a "lesson", and take this into his own hands. He proceeded to listen to the ranting nature of the leader, the two men laughing as he finally said his plan, Yuushi sighed. His eyes came forward as he was a bout to turn, Yuushi kicked him in the face, flipping his body backwards as he took his arms and pushed into the men, as they released him.

"You guys aren't even on my level, go back home, cry to your mothers and ask for a juice-box."

Suddenly frustrated as they regained their composure, the leader stood from the ground, his hands buckling into himself, making a large smile on his face. The other men began to circle him as well, taking their times to outmaneuver him, the leading man nodded to them, as their eyes interlinked, they began to rush forth with great intent to attack.

"Get him!"

A flickering mixture of jabs and uppercuts came, as the weight of his body shifted left and right in rapid succession. His eyes closed as the men stood, eyes wide open in shock of what had just happened, falling backwards as a loud thump was heard. Yuushi began to walk away, taking his hand into his head, moving forward with his eyes closed.

"Idiots..."

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PostSubject: Re: Yuushi Touki - DUN   Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:37 pm

HI ^^

Welcome to the site Very Happy

For the first technique/ability:
How much of a physical boost are you talking about? and also when you say that the flames can protect his hands and feet from strikes and spiritual attacks i gather you know that doesnt mean all, since some strong ones could obviously overpower it if he is outranked.

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Name: Guts Cannon - Kiaihou
Descriptions:
A technique Yuushi has had even before he had the Kiai ability but decided to name it after his first unleashing of it. Yuushi focuses all his strength into his fist, making his fist clench tighter, so much so that his muscles flex and become slightly bigger, he will then punch straightforward, this attack normally was enough to easily knock-out other humans who were twice his size. With the great strength increase, he was able to knock both a Hollow and destroy a small building with his tremendous strength. This is his signature attack.
Duration: 1 post.
Preparation: 1 post.
Cooldown: 2 posts.
A cooldown of at least 3 posts for such a strong punch i think ^^

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Name: Guts Blitz - Kiaisattou
Descriptions:
A technique Yuushi utilizes on an emphasize in speed, he quickly attacks the opponent with a barrage of punches that are exceptionally fast and come at different angles. However, the quickness sacrifices the great power Yuushi possesses and so he usually does this to capture an opponent or dispatch weaker enemies in one-go. The speed of which it is done, makes it seem like afterimages of the fist are moving forward, however faster opponents can see that their are still only two fists(obviously).
Duration: 1-2 posts.
Preparation: 1 post.
Cooldown: 1 post.

how many punches in this barrage? the cooldown should be at the very least 2 posts but if the number of punches determines the cooldown really

Other than that it looks great ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Yuushi Touki - DUN   Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:35 pm

The physical boost is relative to the growth from a ranking point of view, meaning as of now, he would be considered unseated or the lower fraccion of the arrancar. Of course they can be overpowered if sufficient force blasts them(ranking relevant or not).
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PostSubject: Re: Yuushi Touki - DUN   Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:11 am

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