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 Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D

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PostSubject: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:18 pm



~Basic~

Name: Kenshin
Alias/Nickname:
Actual Age: 864
Physical Age: 24
Gender: Male
Division: 5th
Rank: Captain

~Appearance~

Height: 196 cm (6.4 feet)
Weight: 92 kg (202 Lbs)
Eye Color: blue
Hair Color/Style: white having his hair in a tuft allthogh he have one braid on the left side of the head.
Complexion: white lightly tanned
Any distinguishing features: the earring and the tattoo's on his arms
Picture:
Spoiler:
 
Kenshin is a very handsome man, his piercing blue eyes being the first thing one notices about him. They are a piercing blue, with their perfect almond shape, and thick, dark lash lining. His face is long and skinny, with feminine features. His features usually display a non-chalant frown, making him minorly unaproachable. His complextion is pale just slightly tanned, with no imperfections. His long, silky white hair reaches down his back. and is usually put in a tuft. a single braid hangs on his left side for reasons only he knows. he have an earing in his left ear. Kenshin’s other defining feature is his tattoo’s. He has one on each arm, and they are as strange tattoo’s as they come. Nobody is quite sure of their origin, either that or they just keep tight lipped about it, but they are intricate designs that all follow a similar pattern. There are one of each on each arm – the all black on the right and the one with white on the left arm – the black band goes around the middle of the bicep. Also, notice that the tattoo goes the entire way around the arm – it doesn’t just all sit on the visible side. However thoose are most of the time hidden by his clothing

They look identical to these
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~Personality~

Personality: Kenshin is surprisingly polite, soft-spoken intellectual, He rarely shows any sign of alarm or distress keeping calm in the hashest and toughest situations. His casual and gentle when addressing friends or new acquaintances, but gets sarcastic when confronted with an enemy or someone he just doesn’t like. He can often seem to be a little dissipeard in thoughts if he is its probally cause he comminucate with his zanpakotu spirit elara

In combat
The times he actually have to fight he often have the entire situations planned out well in advance. Hayate is a very patient combatant, taking in every detail of his opponents strategy and abilities, and is a genius at determining an opponent’s capabilities and preferred method and when it comes to form strategies and methods to better combat a particular opponent. Hes very quick at adapting if something unforseen would happen that would ruin his plans however it rarley does. he also never shows any sign of alarm or distress and keeps calm in the harshest and toughest situations

Sexuality: Straight
Relationship Status: Single
Quirks:

History:

Kenshin was born in the soul society to the name Fujisen Kenshin the second born son of a noble family, his mother died giving birth to him and his father was a harsh and strict man so Kenshin was basically raised by his older brother, Haji. Haji was born prodigy a brilliant scientist and incredible fighter he could easily rival any captain of the gotei 13 and was the favorite son of the Fujisen family. Unfortunately Kenshin was not quiet as good as brother by the time he was twenty he was still unable to hear his Zanpakuto, though even at that young age Kenshin excelled at Kido and Haji encouraged him.twenty years Kenshin continued his studies becoming a master with a blade and skilled with Kido far beyond his years, spending almost all day either in the dojo with his blade or in the library learning more about Kido. However Kenshins Father never acknowledged his accomplishments saying a true son of the Fujisen household would be able to call upon Shikai. On the eve of his hundredth birthday Haji called Kenshin into the family shrine, when he arrived he found his brother sitting on the families throne with his father in the room acting as his brothers servant.

Confused and surprised Kenshin quickly learned from Haji that his brother had developed a new kido technique that when combined with a special amulet would give Haji complete control over the wearer. He explained how soul society had become weak and it was time for a change, how the Gotei 13 needed to be run not by a council with a leader but by an emperor. The plan was further developed through the mass production of the amulets all Haji needed was his brother to help cast the kido spell on the amulets. Before they were distributed to the captains of the thirteen squads. However Kenshin was appalled by his brothers plan and refused to join him in his plan. No sooner than he spoke did Haji appear in front of him his sword slashing across Kenshin's eyes and blinding him forever. Later that night Kenshin was thrown into a cell deep within the basement of the family household, locked away until he decided to help his brother.

During his time in prison Kenshin considered giving up without his sight he felt helpless and alone. Three months into his imprisonment Kenshin lay on the stone cot he had called home for so long when a voice called to him “So lonely, come to me, come to me…. Hear my call”. Opening his eyes and seeing for the first time since his imprisonment Kenshin awoke deep within the layers of his mind within the world of Zanpakuto. Calling forth his spirit she spoke to him softly granting him sight again and returned him to the real world once again able to see. Back again in the real world Kenshin bided his time adjusting to his new sight all the while keeping up the pretense of depression and isolation, training while the guards were out of sight. Nearly a year into his imprisonment the day of his escape finally came his brother came to visit his cell to offer him his last chance to join or to die. Reaching out Kenshin hugged his brother tight releasing all his reiatsu through his palms and freezing his back before blasting through it with Hado.

Free and mourning over the body of his brother Kenshin barely had time to mourn his loss as the guards charged into the room. Thinking that Kenshin was making a power play for the head of the family they turned on him and he was forced to kill them as well. This got the shinigamis attention and due to fear that this could ruin the balance of soul society they sent shingamis there. At first they found Kenshin guilty and was gonna arrest him and execute him, But a old servant stepped forward telling what had been going on and showed them on of the amulets that haji had been using the one he had used on his father.

Shingami academy years

After his name was cleared he enrolled to the shinigami academy wich he passed in merly two years time he spent almost the whole time in the huge libraries or at the training ground praticing his zanjutsu skills. he graduated with the highest grades possible and with all of the teachers recommendations. it was unclear if he would join the 11th or the 5th squad but after a while he decided to join 5th since they was in charge of kidou corps. after being there for about 3 months he had already reached the spot of liutenant. And no one was suprised when he took the exam to become a captain after the prevesious captain left.


~Zanpakuto Information~

Blade Name: Elara
Sealed Blade appearance:
Spoiler:
 
Zanpaktou spirit:[/b
Spoiler:
 

Personality
Elara is an enigma she reveals very little about her self and seems to play the role of temptress. An extremely sexual being she likes to tease Kenshin with suggestive poses, clothing, and touches; however she never actually moves beyond teasing a fact Kenshin quickly learned. She calls Kenshin her love and has an obsession with jewels often times speaking into Kenshin mind her voice a soft and caressing whisper asking Kenshin to get her some sort of jewel. From what Kenshin does know about her current form is only a guise the vision he will see until he reaches Bankai, at which point she will show Kenshin her true form. The interaction between Kenshin and Elara is peculiar at points it would appear that they are lovers, at other points it seems like she is a temptress trying seduce a man who has no interest in her. In truth Kenshin believes Elara is beautiful but knows that their relationship is one of teasing only, so overtime he has started the habit of teasing her back or negotiating deals with her. While in combat she tends to remain silent now and then saying a few words of encouragement normally along the line “Show them my Love”.

Inner world world appears to be a frozen lake in the middle of an artic tundra, however if you brush the snow off the ice you will see that beneath the ice lies a swirling knot of serpents coiling through one another trapped beneath the ice. In the center of the lake rises a large tower made of ice; the jagged monument rises high into the misty heavens. The tower’s door is a large portal of ice with a wooden texture to it. Within the door is a large spacious room with gigantic frozen chandelier. The walls are lined with various weapons with jeweled hilts all suspended in ice. In the middle of the room is a large stone snake with its mouth open, within the mouth lays a small slit. By inserting his zanpakuto into the slit Kenshin is transported to the top room of the tower an eleven-foot in diameter room with a large frozen throne with the arms shaped like a serpent. This is Elara’s throne room; the walls are lined with jewels and treasures of all sorts as well as mounds of gold two large serpent also call this room home the snakes appear to be made of water but are sturdy and solid. They slither through the gold leaving trails of ice in their wake.

~Shikai Information~

Release Phrase: i call upon your power elara
Released blade appearance:
Spoiler:
 
The edge of the blade constantly flows with water.
Being hit with it is reminiscent of being hit by crashing waves, as water constantly flows from it and the surrounding area. The weapons edge is constantly flowing with water and with every arc and slash, and each crushing blow it creates large waves. its not really ment for cutting more for crushing ones opponent.


~Shikai Techniques/Abilities~

Name of abilty/technique: Water manipulation (passive)
Description:It allows him to control the water in the surrounding atmosphere
The main ability of Kenshin’s shikai is the ability to control water: Its movements, momentum, density, and temperature which thus gives him control over ice. Kenshin’s sword allows him to manipulate water however he likes by manipulating the flow of his own Reiryoku and extending it as though it were going into each drop of water, which as you can guess takes a lot of practice to master.
In the absence of water Kenshin can also create water and ice, but in limited amounts as it needs him to convert Reishi into water. The more Reishi Kenshin use, the more water he can create.

Name of abilty/technique: "Izumi Ukiyo" - Spring of life.
Description: Izumi Ukiyo, the spring of life. This attack calls all the nearby water towards Kenshin, water from nearby lakes, streams, puddles and the like. Kenshin can also call upon water from underground streams that burst up through the ground this is done through kenshin drill a hole with reishi so to speak until he reach a underground stream where Kenshin has stabbed his zanpakotu. much easier would of course be to call on water that is closer to the surface wich is what he often does since it takes less time and reishi to do. Or even water from the surrounding atmosphere. The water swirls around him constantly, awaiting his control. he can gather water from a mile radius in shikai in bankai its two
Duration: for shikai 7 posts for bankai 12
Cooldown 2 posts and he must have used up the water he already have summoned


[Name of abilty/technique:"Kiri Koozui" - Cutting flood
Description: Kiri Koozui, upon command, fires a jet of high-density and high-power water from Kenshin's blade in a straight line from where he is pointing elara. The more Reishi he puts into the attack, the more powerful it is. The jet acts as an extention of his blade, and can cut through most things easily, for example rock can be turned to dust and rubble if enough power is put behind the attack. Kenshin can tip this attack with a thick, sharp shard of ice, it cannot be blocked by a zanpakotu
Preperation: if used after natsu owarou instant if not 1 post in shikai in bankai instant even if natsu owarou not been used
cooldown if used after natsu owarou non since its already created water and take nearly no reishi to reform it into the jet of water if not 2 posts (1 in bankai)

If used after Natsu Owarou, Kiri Koozui becomes a similar attack but is a torrent of ice, rather than water.

Kenshin can use more powerful Kiri Koozui if he has already used Izumi Ukiyo, as he uses the water under his control at that time which is much more in substance than the water he can create.


Name of abilty/technique: "Natsu Owaru" - Summer's end.
Description: This technique is Kenshin's freezing technique. When Kenshin commands elara to use this attack, all the water he is controlling or has created immediatley freezes. Ie, if Kenshin use this attack during Kiri Koozui, the water attack immediately turns into an ice attack. If you clothes are wet they will freeze if your skin are wet it freeze.
preperation none


~Bankai~(Captains only)

Blade Name: Elara
Bankai Appearance/spirit manifestation:
Spoiler:
 


~Bankai Information~

Release Phrase: Bankai (suprised no long release phrase Razz )
Released blade appearance:
Spoiler:
 
water still flows around the blade however its not that visible when hes in bankai

~Bankai Techniques/Abilities~
All of his power from shikai is amplified in shikai and he can still use them.
it also gives him a increase in his reishi

Name of abilty/technique: ice water manipulation (passive)
Description: Still have same abilities as in shikai Just amplified. now the blade is also for stabbing and cutting. if you get stabbed by the blade a pice of it will seem to break of that piece will slowly start freeze you from the inside out. if you get cut however the wound will freeze and it will slowly spread freezing you from the outside
Duration: Passive

Name of abilty/technique: mizu hidora (water hydra) diffrent variant aizu hidora ( ice hydra)
Description: several dragon heads made of water appears from the ground theese hydras so to say have a intelligence of their own and as much reishi that kenshin puts into them that they can use as they like but once its used up they will dissipear. they can fire balls of water from their mouths with such a force it can shatter a rock or send someone flying into a wall depending on strenght in the ball. they can also dive down over their opponent and swallow them so to say to drown them. there is an ice variant of this attack also its basiclly the same thing however the balls they can fire will shatter and soak the opponent to then freeze the water. and if they swallow them the opponent will slowly be frozen outside in resulting in death if they arent fast or strong enough to get out of the attack.
Preparation: Kenshin stabs the ground with his sword the more time he have stabbed it into the ground the more heads the hydra will have. and the more reishi it will take from him 1-2 heads instant 3-4 take 1 post 5-6 take 2 posts 7-8 take 3 posts you get the point the more heads the more post it take to prepare
Duration until destroyed or they are out of reishi

Name of abilty/technique:
Description: Kenshin points his blade towards the oppoenent, elara slightly tilted upwards. his Reishi begins to build up rapidly to the point where it becomes visible around him. The temperature His blade begins to glow with his sharp coloured Rieatsu. There is a large, blinding flash of light, and Kenshin's blade is now coated in black ice. As the flash fades, Kenshin's blade can be seen letting off steam, that expands over an area of a mile circular around Kenshin.

This steam thickens in Kenshin's next post into a watery mist which makes it easier for Kenshin to use water and ice based abilities. Kenshin's black ice coating on his sword has now thickened. The coldness of the ice, , when it hits bare skin sticks to the opponent if left for long enough, and can cause minor, irritating freeze burns.

The final stage of Fyuu-Koujou is the thickening into the fog. This occurs after the water have turned into mist. The fog is so dense and cold, that continued exposure to it is dangerous. The fog has a temperature of roughly minus twentyfour degrees celcius, and you cannont see any more than your swords length (a normal katanas sword length) infront of you, anything past that forms as black shadows or dull grey blurs. The fog is eerily quiet, no outside sound can pierce the thick, icy prison, and so sounds inside echo and reverberate oddly, adding to the panic many feel inside it. The cold is piercing, and unrelenting, and Kenshin's similar Reishi is magnifed through the fog. Some inside it panic when they realise that they cannot get out simply by walking forwards, the fog usually tricks them into walking in a slight curve, and if you lose your cool in the fog, you freeze. The fog can be momentarily blown away by an explosion, or a wind attack, but it will descend again quickly, its heavy, quiet blanket wrapping itself around Kenshin and his opponent once more. His entire blade is now coated in a creeping, black ice. Anything that touches it begins to freeze slowly.
Duration: until he runs out of reishi or is forced out of it or deactivate it himself.
Preparation: read description but a obvius one is he must have released his bankai
[cooldown] 3 posts


~Other Techniques~
Swordsmanship: Advanced
Shunpo: intermetidiate
Hand to hand: basic
Kido: Advanced

Others

Sight of Elara
This is what make him able to see and is a permanently activated ability
Description: A passive ability that allows Kenshin to sense with a 358 degree radius (reduced to ten feet behind him despite his blindness. Anything passing through his reitsu or disrupting it, such as an individual, a different reitsu, or projectile will cause a rather clear distortion within that reitsu that Kenshin will be able to perceive clearly, therefore allowing him to detect even that which might be invisible to them otherwise. The disturbed Reitsu paints a rather clear picture of what is coming. This allows for hayate to make out the full silhouette of the individual or item coming towards him, or sense the intensity and strength of an intruding Reitsu anything with reishi is covered in an aura that reflects the reishi of the respective person. Since even normal persons have reishi even if its very low he can see it since it will be there for as long as they live (and even as plus/hollow/shinigami as long as they exist they will emit reishi)


~Other Information~


~Rp Sample~
Aight this is as much as a rp sample a little fillout for my background that i feelt got kinda short just wanted to point that out to anyone whom might read this

Morality and his brother:
kenshin rubbed his eyes lazily as he got out of bed, it was roughly five thirty in the morning and it was time for his morning training. The sun was just barely brimming the horizon and little light flowed through the open window on the side of his bedroom. Picking up his zanapkuto he tapped the blade a few times “Hello? Anyone there? Say nothing if you’re an incredibly powerful spirit who will reveal himself to me soon…Great”. Now fully awake he pulled on his clothes and pushed aside the screen door that led to the court yard of the Fujisen courtyard, he loved the courtyard the wide training field where the guards walked on patrol surrounded by cherry tree’s and a large rock fountain with a spot right in the middle where he could lie back and read without getting wet. With a smile he hopped the fence into the courtyard landing from his second floor balcony with light thud and surprising the guards in front of the entrance to the main hall. “Master kenshin, Master Haji has requested your presence in the ancestral shrine.”, kenshinsmiled recognizing the voice almost instantly and spinning around to face his brother.

“And what if I don’t want to join Master Haji huh? Maybe I got better things to do... maybe I got myself a girl just like you baldy”. Haji smiled his six foot framed outlined by the sun which reflected off his freshly shaved head. “Your too ugly, to get a girl kenshin… plus I’m done with Tsunadi, she started talking about marriage and weddings and children… trust me kenshin that’s a fail proof sign to end it.”. kenshin smiled his brother was known as the biggest playboy among the nobility, though he gave all the credit to his green eyes. “now quit fooling around I got something I wana show you.”. kenshin chuckled falling in line behind his brother and heading across the courtyard to a separate building, the ancestral shrine a place only the Fujisen family could enter.

The ancestral shrine was covered with relics of the past, swords and armors coated the walls while family treasures lined the alters around the inside perimeter. Each treasure accompanied by an ornate painting of its first and original owner. At the very front of the room lay an ornate gold throne a gift from his father to those who came before him. Without a hesitation Haji walked up the three steps to throne sitting down and crossing his legs. “Haji get off of that father will kill you”. Haji smiled adjusting his position slightly before raising his hand and beaconing to a shadowy form in the shrine. Out from the shadows walked Haji’s father an imposing man with long grey hair, incredibly muscular build and a nearly seven-foot frame; he aptly carried the nickname ‘the giant Fujisen’. “I would never harm lord Haji, I will do his bidding with out fail, I am his servant”. kenshin took a step back looking at his father and then his brother unable to digest the scene in front of him. ”Haji what’s going on here? Why is father talking like that…why isn’t he yelling?”.

Haji rose from the throne circling his father slowly before turning to kenshin, “Father will never yell at us again, his tyrannical rule of this house is over thanks to this…I call it a speaker”. As Haji finished speaking he lifted a small amulet from his fathers chest displaying it to kenshin without removing it from their father’s neck. Still confused and somewhat flabbergasted kenshin said nothing for a long moment staring at his father and brother. “What is it?”. Haji smiled his voice brimming with pride “It’s my newest invention, by using this amulet I can turn even the most powerful adversary into my humble servant, and once I present these amulets as a gift to the captains of the gotei thirteen next year at your academy acceptance ceremony, we will become the most powerful noble house in history.”. kenshin stared barely believing the words coming from his brothers mouth, this couldn’t be true, his brother had never been anything but kind the perfect brother and son, not to mention his fathers favorite a fact that was never a secret. “Haji, think of what your saying…It’s…. It’s treason and even worse its enslavement.”. Haji’s smile disappeared at kenshin's words his face hardening as he spoke “Don’t be so black and white, your too short sighted kenshin, the thirteen protection societies are weak and the bureaucracy of it all is a liability we can’t afford. What we need is a single strong leader but the captains would never agree to such a thing they’re too concerned with their own authority to see what needs to be done. We need a strong and just leader… one who can make the hard decisions and with this I can be that leader, I can do it for soul society. I can save soul society from itself and form it into the ultimate empire.”. kenshin took a few steps back tears filling his eyes as he spoke his voice an anguished cry, “Haji think of what you’re saying, it’s wrong… please Haji, don’t do this take the amulet off father and stop this, craziness”. Haji looked down dropping the amulet, his voice now edged with sadness, “I’m sorry kenshin… so sorry… I had thought you would help me make these amulets, that together we would save soul society”. As Haji spoke his eyes filled with tears and kenshin moved slowly towards him. Suddenly Haji’s eyes filled with anger and hate as he spoke “But now I see you’re as useless and short sighted as father was.”. Suddenly Haji was in front of kenshin his Zanpakuto flashing with incredibly fast strike across kenshin's eyes. Suddenly kenshin did see nothing but darkness his hands flying up to cover his face, as he dropped to the ground. “Don’t worry brother… you won’t have to see how wrong you were”, the last words kenshin heard before he felt the hilt of Haji’s sword slam into the back of his head knocking him out.

First encounter with Spirit:
kenshin woke in his cell, he didn’t bother to rub his eyes, they didn’t do anything anyway. He could tell it was bout mid-day from the hustle and bustle of house, maids were washing linens in the courtyard and he could smell his cold breakfast on the floor by the door. Lunch would be coming soon, he thought as he rubbed his zanpkauto his fingers running along the familiar surface of the blade his only comfort in a world of darkness. “So sad my love”. The voice seemed but a whisper in the darkness a seductive call meant merely to trick him. “Who’s there what do you want?”, kenshin called his words almost spat out in anger. “So lonely my love… come to me… come to me…. Hear my call”. The world it self seemed to spin around kenshin and he suddenly had the sensation of falling he could practically feel the air running through his hair when suddenly he hit the ground with a thud.

Blinking a little kenshin tried to adjust to the sudden brightness of the room… but when he looked up he wasn’t in a room, no around him was nothing but snow and he lay on a bed of ice. With difficulty he rose to his knees when it dawned on him, he could see, for the first time in months kenshin could see… see the world around him. Suddenly kenshin had the urge to see himself, a sight he never thought he would see again. His hands rapidly began to rub the snow off the ice below him his fingers and body numb from the cold but it barely even registered with him. As the ice cleared kenshin looked at his reflection he could see himself, see the scar across the brim of his nose and the milky white hue of his eyes. “Come to me, Come to me my love”, the voice called out to him as if from within himself… “where are you, who are you… what’s happening?” but the voice didn’t answer simply repeating once more, “Come to me, Come to me my love”. kenshin looked at the water swirling beneath the ice, the scaly living water, when he realized beneath the ice was a mass of twisting serpents. Slowly he made his way to his feet still glaring at the serpents below, “Come to me, Come to me my love”. Suddenly as the voice spoke the storm of snow that surrounded him in a white fog began to clear revealing a large tower in the center of the frozen lake.

Slowly he made his way against the wind and to the tower door pushing the colossal door as easily as if it were made of feathers and walking into the tower. Within the door was a large spacious room with a gigantic frozen chandelier. The walls lined with various weapons with jeweled hilts all suspended in ice and in the middle of the room lay a large stone snake with its mouth open a small slit visible within it. “Choose wisely my love, find it my love”. Again the voice spoke and again kenshin listened after all he had no idea what else to do. Walking along the walls of the room kenshin passed rows and racks of beautiful and ornate weapons each one a treasure fit for a king but deep within in he felt like these blades were empty shadows, and tricks of the light so he didn’t touch them. Until he reached the far wall their wedged between a large golden Guan Dao and a machete which seemed to made of solid ruby lay a plain katana, yet to kenshin the closer he got to it seemed to glow with dim light. His hand reached out before he could think about it, the ice surrounding the blade retracting and releasing it as he gripped it. The blade felt light but sturdy in his hand and it seemed like the weapon itself had been forged just for him. Suddenly kenshin knew barely able to contain his excitement he said it out loud, “You’re my Zanpakuto”. “So smart my love is, so very smart”.

With out truly knowing why or how kenshin knew what to do and went to the serpent statue, sliding the blade of the katana into the serpent’s mouth. The world seemed to flash a bright blue and suddenly mounds of gold and treasure all covered in ice surrounded kenshin . “Oh my love, my beautiful love”, kenshin barely had time to react when suddenly a large breasted woman with blue hair grabbed him driving his face in between her breasts and practically suffocating him against her scantily clad body. Pushing off kenshin fell to the ground and stared in awe at the beauty in front of him her pale flawless figure with dark blue hair and bright blue eyes standing over him. “why do you push away from me, why do you not accept my love… do you not recognize me?”. Flabbergasted kenshin tripped over his words for a second finally speaking one intelligible sentence with a large smile on his face “You’re my Zanpakuto”. Elara grabbed him again lifting him into her arms and hugging him tightly then pulling away to look at his face a gasp coming out. “My love, your eyes….Who… Who dares defile your beautiful eyes”, the very walls of the room rumbled from Elara’s rage her voice trembling with anger. Before Kenshin could speak she spoke again her voice still filled with anger only one word escaping her lips ”HAJI”.

Suddenly Elara stormed away towards her throne two large eight-foot serpents rising from behind it and sliding towards kenshin, bowing their heads in front of him. “We have no time for pleasantry my love, go take my servants and show that horrid brother of yours my rage”. kenshin stared not saying a word the snakes waiting patiently until finally his words came out, “But… I don’t even know how to call you, I don’t know your name… and I’m blind”. A sly smile snuck across Elara’s face and she spoke “You’re not blind anymore… and of course you know my name". kenshin didn’t have the chance to speak before the two serpents lunged at him the snakes seeming to shrink as they dived into kenshin's eyes.
Suddenly kenshin sat up with a jolt, back in his cell in his house, but this time he could see. Raising his hand holding his Zanpakuto he spoke while his grip tightened around the hilt, “You’re my Zanpakuto… Elara”.


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PostSubject: Re: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:29 pm

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Name of abilty/technique: ice armor improved (passive)
Description: Upon release when kenshin is hidden in reishi ice will surround his body creating a protective layer similar to a arrancars hierro in this case its similar to a 6th espadas hierro
Duration: Passive

I think that is too powerful for a passive ability.

Quote :
Name of abilty/technique: Water manipulation (passive)
Description:It allows him to control the weather in the immediate vicinity, or more specifically, control the water in the surrounding atmosphere
The main ability of Kenshin’s shikai is the ability to control water: Its movements, momentum, density, and temperature which thus gives him control over ice. Kenshin’s sword allows him to manipulate water however he likes by manipulating the flow of his own Reiryoku and extending it as though it were going into each drop of water, which as you can guess takes a lot of practice to master.
In the absence of water Kenshin can also create water and ice, but in limited amounts as it needs him to convert Reishi into water. The more Reishi Kenshin use, the more water he can create

Not the weather, i don't think he should be able to control the weather. Sure he can control the water in the surrounding environment though. How close to water does he have to be to use it? How is he able to control it's density and temperature? Also this might be a passive ability but the attacks themselves need some kind of cooldown if you understnad what i mean, so maybe add a cooldown for the actual attacks etc. Also if he is making the water then he would need a cooldown to simulate the fact he would be tired from it etc.

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Name of abilty/technique: "Izumi Ukiyo" - Spring of life.
Description: Izumi Ukiyo, the spring of life. This attack calls all the nearby water towards Kenshin, water from nearby lakes, streams, puddles and the like. Kenshin can also call upon water from underground streams that burst up through the ground where Kenshin has stabbed a hole through. Or even water from the surrounding atmosphere. The water swirls around him constantly, awaiting his control.
Duration: until all water is used up

From how far away can he draw the water? nearby doesnt really give us a clear picture and leaves it too open. Also if you are to do this we would be trusting you not to overuse it like for example having dozens of undergtrtound streams bursting up....after all what are the odds you are above so many xD Add a maximum duration as well, to make it more fair. Maybe 7 posts or something just so you cant constantly have water and it stops you from drawing too much as well.

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Name of abilty/technique:"Kiri Koozui" - Cutting flood
Description: Kiri Koozui, upon command, fires a jet of high-density and high-power water from Kenshin's blade in a straight line from where he is pointing elara. The more Reishi he puts into the attack, the more powerful it is. The jet acts as an extention of his blade, and can cut through most things easily, for example rock can be turned to dust and rubble if enough power is put behind the attack. Kenshin can tip this attack with a thick, sharp shard of ice,

O.k so i just want to know a rough level of the strength of it, for example could a zanpaktou block it? etc also a cooldown, preperation, etc is needed.

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Name of abilty/technique: "Natsu Owaru" - Summer's end.
Description: This technique is Kenshin's freezing technique. When Kenshin commands elara to use this attack, all the water he is controlling or has created immediatley freezes. Ie, if Kenshin use this attack during Kiri Koozui, the water attack immediately turns into an ice attack. If you are wet, you freeze.

Well no xD if your clothess are wet the water freezes not you xD you might become cold due to that but you dont freeze. Also know that ice is something that will be broken by those strong enough, im not going to make you say that as it is obvious really ^^ but just know that i would expect it to be able to be broken by those of enough strength.

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The edge of the blade constantly flows with water.
Being hit with it is reminiscent of being hit by crashing waves, as water constantly flows from it and the surrounding area. The weapons edge is constantly flowing with water and with every arc and slash, and each crushing blow it creates large waves. its not really ment for cutting more for crushing ones opponent.

I like the idea of it having water flowing down the blade constantly but the whole large waves with every slash is too much.

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PostSubject: Re: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Tue Nov 09, 2010 7:48 am

there ill add some personal tech and kidous to the appropiate sector later but for now it should all be in order
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PostSubject: Re: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:11 pm

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Name of abilty/technique: "Izumi Ukiyo" - Spring of life.
Description: Izumi Ukiyo, the spring of life. This attack calls all the nearby water towards Kenshin, water from nearby lakes, streams, puddles and the like. Kenshin can also call upon water from underground streams that burst up through the ground where Kenshin has stabbed a hole through. Or even water from the surrounding atmosphere. The water swirls around him constantly, awaiting his control. he can gather water from a mile radius in shikai in bankai its two
Duration: for shikai 7 posts for bankai 12
Cooldown 2 posts and he must have used up the water he already have summoned

This ability is rather powerful. The water would be only surface water, which would encompass alot. But making a hole in the ground and getting water that way is too powerful.

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Sight of Elara
This is what make him able to see and is a permanently activated ability
Description: A passive ability that allows Kenshin to sense with a 360 degree radius (reduced to ten feet behind him despite his blindness. Anything passing through his reitsu or disrupting it, such as an individual, a different reitsu, or projectile will cause a rather clear distortion within that reitsu that Kenshin will be able to perceive clearly, therefore allowing him to detect even that which might be invisible to them otherwise. The disturbed Reitsu paints a rather clear picture of what is coming. This allows for hayate to make out the full silhouette of the individual or item coming towards him, or sense the intensity and strength of an intruding Reitsu anything with reishi is covered in an aura that reflects the reishi of the respective person. Since even normal persons have reishi even if its very low he can see it since it will be there for as long as they live (and even as plus/hollow/shinigami as long as they exist they will emit reishi)

No one has a perfect 360 degree radius. Tosen didn't, and he was blind. And to risk sounding like a nerd, Neji didn't have a perferct 360 degree radius. This needs a blind spot.
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PostSubject: Re: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:06 am

bump of approval Very Happy

edited all and even go more indepth on my skills so ^^ id like to get apped now


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PostSubject: Re: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Tue Nov 16, 2010 10:00 am

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Name of abilty/technique:
Description: Kenshin points his blade towards the oppoenent, elara slightly tilted upwards. his Reishi begins to build up rapidly to the point where it becomes visible around him. The temperature His blade begins to glow with his sharp coloured Rieatsu. There is a large, blinding flash of light, and Kenshin's blade is now coated in black ice. As the flash fades, Kenshin's blade can be seen letting off steam, that expands over an area of a mile circular around Kenshin.

This steam thickens in Kenshin's next post into a watery mist which makes it easier for Kenshin to use water and ice based abilities. Kenshin's black ice coating on his sword has now thickened. The coldness of the ice, , when it hits bare skin sticks to the opponent if left for long enough, and can cause minor, irritating freeze burns.

The final stage of Fyuu-Koujou is the thickening into the fog. This occurs after the water have turned into mist. The fog is so dense and cold, that continued exposure to it is dangerous. The fog has a temperature of roughly minus twentyfour degrees celcius, and you cannont see any more than your swords length (a normal katanas sword length) infront of you, anything past that forms as black shadows or dull grey blurs. The fog is eerily quiet, no outside sound can pierce the thick, icy prison, and so sounds inside echo and reverberate oddly, adding to the panic many feel inside it. The cold is piercing, and unrelenting, and Kenshin's similar Reishi is magnifed through the fog. Some inside it panic when they realise that they cannot get out simply by walking forwards, the fog usually tricks them into walking in a slight curve, and if you lose your cool in the fog, you freeze. The fog can be momentarily blown away by an explosion, or a wind attack, but it will descend again quickly, its heavy, quiet blanket wrapping itself around Kenshin and his opponent once more. His entire blade is now coated in a creeping, black ice. Anything that touches it begins to freeze slowly.
Duration: until he runs out of reishi or is forced out of it or deactivate it himself.
Preparation: read description but a obvius one is he must have released his bankai
[cooldown] 3 posts

Please lengthen the cooldown with 4 more posts.

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Name of abilty/technique: mizu hidora (water hydra) diffrent variant aizu hidora ( ice hydra)
Description: several dragon heads made of water appears from the ground theese hydras so to say have a intelligence of their own and as much reishi that kenshin puts into them that they can use as they like but once its used up they will dissipear. they can fire balls of water from their mouths with such a force it can shatter a rock or send someone flying into a wall depending on strenght in the ball. they can also dive down over their opponent and swallow them so to say to drown them. there is an ice variant of this attack also its basiclly the same thing however the balls they can fire will shatter and soak the opponent to then freeze the water. and if they swallow them the opponent will slowly be frozen outside in resulting in death if they arent fast or strong enough to get out of the attack.
Preparation: Kenshin stabs the ground with his sword the more time he have stabbed it into the ground the more heads the hydra will have. and the more reishi it will take from him 1-2 heads instant 3-4 take 1 post 5-6 take 2 posts 7-8 take 3 posts you get the point the more heads the more post it take to prepare
Duration until destroyed or they are out of reishi

Only quincies have shown the ability to manipulate reishi, no other being can, so please remove the fact that he can infuse reishi in the hydra. This technique lacks a cooldown. Please give it a cooldown of 6 posts, at least.

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Name of abilty/technique: "Natsu Owaru" - Summer's end.
Description: This technique is Kenshin's freezing technique. When Kenshin commands elara to use this attack, all the water he is controlling or has created immediatley freezes. Ie, if Kenshin use this attack during Kiri Koozui, the water attack immediately turns into an ice attack. If you clothes are wet they will freeze if your skin are wet it freeze.
preperation none

This technique lacks a cooldown.

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[Name of abilty/technique:"Kiri Koozui" - Cutting flood
Description: Kiri Koozui, upon command, fires a jet of high-density and high-power water from Kenshin's blade in a straight line from where he is pointing elara. The more Reishi he puts into the attack, the more powerful it is. The jet acts as an extention of his blade, and can cut through most things easily, for example rock can be turned to dust and rubble if enough power is put behind the attack. Kenshin can tip this attack with a thick, sharp shard of ice, it cannot be blocked by a zanpakotu
Preperation: if used after natsu owarou instant if not 1 post in shikai in bankai instant even if natsu owarou not been used
cooldown if used after natsu owarou non since its already created water and take nearly no reishi to reform it into the jet of water if not 2 posts (1 in bankai)

Please remove the fact that a zanpakuto can't block the shard of ice. Also, lenghten the cooldown with at least 1 more post.

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Name of abilty/technique: "Izumi Ukiyo" - Spring of life.
Description: Izumi Ukiyo, the spring of life. This attack calls all the nearby water towards Kenshin, water from nearby lakes, streams, puddles and the like. Kenshin can also call upon water from underground streams that burst up through the ground this is done through kenshin drill a hole with reishi so to speak until he reach a underground stream where Kenshin has stabbed his zanpakotu. much easier would of course be to call on water that is closer to the surface wich is what he often does since it takes less time and reishi to do. Or even water from the surrounding atmosphere. The water swirls around him constantly, awaiting his control. he can gather water from a mile radius in shikai in bankai its two
Duration: for shikai 7 posts for bankai 12
Cooldown 2 posts and he must have used up the water he already have summoned

2 posts are a rather short cooldown for a technique that lasts 7 to 12 posts. Lenghten the cooldown or shorten the duration. Also, you haven't removed the fact that he can draw water from the ground like Mina asked.

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Name of abilty/technique: Water manipulation (passive)
Description:It allows him to control the water in the surrounding atmosphere
The main ability of Kenshin’s shikai is the ability to control water: Its movements, momentum, density, and temperature which thus gives him control over ice. Kenshin’s sword allows him to manipulate water however he likes by manipulating the flow of his own Reiryoku and extending it as though it were going into each drop of water, which as you can guess takes a lot of practice to master.
In the absence of water Kenshin can also create water and ice, but in limited amounts as it needs him to convert Reishi into water. The more Reishi Kenshin use, the more water he can create.

Converting reishi into water is a impossibility. It would be different if he could convert his Reiryoku into water, though.

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Sight of Elara
This is what make him able to see and is a permanently activated ability
Description: A passive ability that allows Kenshin to sense with a 358 degree radius (reduced to ten feet behind him despite his blindness. Anything passing through his reitsu or disrupting it, such as an individual, a different reitsu, or projectile will cause a rather clear distortion within that reitsu that Kenshin will be able to perceive clearly, therefore allowing him to detect even that which might be invisible to them otherwise. The disturbed Reitsu paints a rather clear picture of what is coming. This allows for hayate to make out the full silhouette of the individual or item coming towards him, or sense the intensity and strength of an intruding Reitsu anything with reishi is covered in an aura that reflects the reishi of the respective person. Since even normal persons have reishi even if its very low he can see it since it will be there for as long as they live (and even as plus/hollow/shinigami as long as they exist they will emit reishi)

A 3 degree blindspot is rather small. Lower it with at least 20 degrees. And just to mention it, living things does not emit Reishi.

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PostSubject: Re: Shinigami Kenshin DONE :D   Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:29 pm

And just to add to Tia's point about the ground water, pulling water out of the atmosphere is a little extreme unless it was raining. Water vapour in the air shouldn't be able to be accessed with Spring of Life.
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