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PostSubject: Tomix Drakeson   Mon Dec 06, 2010 11:22 am

Arrancar/Espada Application


~Basic~

Name:Tomix Drakeson
Alias/Nickname: The Talon
Actual Age:38o
Physical Age: 16
Gender:Male
Rank:[/b] privaron espada

~Appearance~

Height:165cm
Weight:???
Eye Color:Green
Hair Color/Style: Black hair, goes over his eyes.
Complexion:

Remains of Mask: Covers left forearm.
Hollow Hole: Left hand.
Espada Tattoo: Right hand.
Picture: http://api.ning.com/files/*jtyG4o44uA3PjAOTWdFVEcgJE6Ux0ACQHCr*ei9tKBIwpackiodQylObr-*NDykxNKwCDGj-p03MOZXTvCaUMgmHOJgJjBZ/AnimeGuy.jpg

*Except, he has dark green eyes, and jet black hair.*


~Personality~

Personality: Tomix had a dark, tormented past, one he wishes to tell only the person he wishes to spend his life with. He prefers to be alone, but he values human life. He prefers not to fight, but will if he is forced to.
Quirks: Has a habit to blush around girls.
Sexuality:Straight
Relationship Status:Single, looking.
History:The first thirteen years of Tomix's life were normal. He was the youngest in his family, younger then his sister and brother. Well, normal except for the fact that he could always see Arrancar and Shinigami and people like that. He learned to accept that these were beings only he, his brother, and his friends Grif and Sara could see. The four of them had met when they had started school, and were fast friends straight away. Tomix had always seemed nervous around Sara, which was the subject of constant jokes from Grif and Avon, Tomix's brother. The group of friends did everything together, and they were always inseperable. Disaster struck when Avon died from gunshot wounds from an unknown assaliant. The fifteen year old died instantly. The friends were saddened, but became tighter friends from his death. Tomix even plucked up the courage to ask Sara out; he was always believed this was the happiest point of his life. This all came crashing to and end when Tomix turned Thirteen. That night, Tomix died. He was killed by a falling telephone pole.

Quickly, Hollows appeared around him, eating him. He screamed for his friends, for his family, but it seemed that couldn't hear him. Tomix had no memorey after this. The next thing he remembered, he woke up in a room, and a man was telling him he was an Arrancar. This man was Aizen, Aizen explained Tomix was an Arrancar of signifigent power, and was given the title of Octava Espada. When Tomix met the other Espada, he was shocked to see his brother Avon there. Avon in turn, was shocked to see Tomix having a higher rank then him.

Tomix worked for Aizen for a year, following orders. However, he betrayed Aizen one day, a year after he began work for him, after a fateful night. Tomix was on patrol in Karakura Town, searching for souls to become powerful Arrancar. He had a habit of passing his childhood home, and when he did, fire seemed to be lighting it from within. Inside, stood Avon, with an alchemical symbol on the ground. His families corpses stood around him. TOmix screamed, and attacked Avon, wanting to kill his brother. To his even greater horror, Sara's body lay there as well. He slashed at Avon, who vanished in a purple light. A voice echoed, saying : "Meet me at the Forest of Menos..."

Tomix went there, and a climatic battle ensued. Brother against brother clashed there, Tomix's rage being his drive. Avon seemed to match his ressurecion normally, being too arrogant to use his own. He was about to land the killing blow on Tomix, when Tomix used Alchemy on his own non-vital organs, slashing through the stunned Avon. Avon's eyes seemed to flicker, and a deep smile was etched across his face. Avon laughed as his body turned to dust. Tomix, consfused, walked away from the battlefield. Suddenly, Avon emerged from the dust, leaping at Tomix, a mad look in his eyes. Tomix was stabbed, in the arm, and in immense pain, stumbled away, leaving Avon laughing behind him.
Aizen was waiting nearby. He told Tomix he was not worthy to be an Espada, losing to a weaker Espada. Tomix spat on him, and used his extreme speed to escape from Aizen.

And from that day, Tomix had wandered the desrt, searching for a new purpose in life.

(The higher the rank the more you should write)

~Resurreccion~

Name:Giruvargan
Seal Description:???
Aspect of Death:Loneliness
Release Phrase: Fly, Giruvargan
Element/Class type:Wind (Lightning, fire, water/ice, wind, earth, shadows, dark matter, ect)
Resurreccion Appearance: In his ressurecion form, he grows two massive black wings, and his sword grows longer, and becomes pitch black.

~Standard Techniques~

Name:Infinity Cero
Description:Tomix casts a large purple cero, which is stronger then a normal cero.
Duration:1 post.
Cool Down: 2 posts.

~Innate Techniques~(Techniques almost exclusive to your character, NO MORE THAN 6 IN TOTAL, this includes resurrecion and out of resurrecion shoudl you choose to have some not in resureccion))

Name:Artifical Intelligence, Delta
Usage: Delta increases the power level of Tomix's speed, giving him twice as much speed. He would move at about 300 km/h.
Description:Tomix activates the AI implanted within him.
Duration:10 posts.
Cool Down:8 posts.

Name:Alchemic Transmutation
Usage: Tomix touches the materials he wishes to use in his Alchemy.
Description:Tomix can use a material, and using the tatoos on his arms, transmutate them into somthing else. There are limits to this technique. For an example, he can only create somthing of equal or less value. He cannot create a human. For an example, he could turn a stick into a short wooden sword. Or turn a leather hat into a leather helmet. He can still fight while preforming the transumutation, but for larger objects, for an example a large rock, he will need to place both hands on it. He can use Alchemy as many times as he can, as long as he has materials for it.
Duration:Instant
Cool Down:2 Posts, and he can't fight while preforming large-scale Alchemy.

~Rp Sample~
They had found him again. Tomix gave a quiter sigh. He was sick and tired of having to hide from Arrancar all the time...He was wanted for the murder of the 9th Espada, rebelling against orders, and forsaking the Espada. He never did want to return, all he wanted to do was just wander the desert.

An Arrancar lept at him from over a sand dune. Tomix pointed at him, firing a purple cero at him. The arrancar was knocked back, barely alive. Tomix valued life, and did not kill him. Two more Arrancar lept at him, trying to suprise him. He gave a swift kick to one, sending him flying a large distance, then pulled out his sword, and switfly stabbed the other.
"Don't get in my way...you hear now?" He spoke to the half dead Arrancar. It gave a terrifed squeak, and closed it eyes.

"Pathetic." Tomix murmued. He walked away, his hands in his pocket, wondering where this road would lead him.


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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Wed Dec 08, 2010 1:57 pm

hey,

We don't really allow Former Espada, exceptions can be made but that is usually for the canon espada. We have Privaron Espada however which are those that lost their rank as they were demoted and other more powerful espada's took there place. If however you have your heart set on being former espada then please speak to Tia ^^ she is the one that will be able to make the decision to allow exceptions ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:58 am

Can you give me the rank of Privion Espada, and I'll say I left the Espada as well?
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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Thu Dec 09, 2010 9:12 am

so you are wishing to state that you another took your rank and instead of being demoted you left ??

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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Thu Dec 09, 2010 12:21 pm

Well, yeah, like someone took his rank, then he had the massive fight with his brother, then he left Aizen's army.
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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Thu Dec 09, 2010 12:26 pm

Well as long as the main gist of it is that he was defeated by another espada and therefore demoted then it should be fine. Why don't you make it that the espada that beat him was his brother xD that solves both problems.

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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Thu Dec 09, 2010 12:35 pm

Changed History.
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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Thu Dec 09, 2010 12:45 pm

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Name:Alchemic Transmutation
Usage: Tomix touches the materials he wishes to use in his Alchemy.
Description:Tomix can use a material, and using the tatoos on his arms, transmutate them into somthing else. There are limits to this technique. For an example, he can only create somthing of equal or less value. He cannot create a human. For an example, he could turn a stick into a short wooden sword. Or turn a leather hat into a leather helmet. He can still fight while preforming the transumutation, but for larger objects, for an example a large rock, he will need to place both hands on it. He can use Alchemy as many times as he can, as long as he has materials for it.
Duration:Instant
Cool Down:None, but he can't fight while preforming Alchemy.

you contradict yourself here, first you say that he can't still fight while performing it but in cool down you say he cannot.

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Actual Age:38
i am not sure if this is a typo or not but 38 is too young xD

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Name:Artifical Intelligence, Delta
Usage: Delta increases the power level of Tomix's speed, giving him twice as much speed.
Description:Tomix activates the AI implanted within him.
Duration:10 posts.
Cool Down:8 posts
How fast would you say he would be then? i would like to know how fast before i approve it.

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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Sat Dec 11, 2010 3:46 am

other admin/mods have discussed your alchemy ability with me and wish for you add a cooldown to it. Also out of my own curiosity i know you added 300km/h but how fast is that compard to say a captain?

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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:05 am

Edited.

Also, I estimate Tomix's sonido speed would be on par with a captain's shunpo.
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PostSubject: Re: Tomix Drakeson   Sat Dec 11, 2010 3:41 pm

alrighty seeing as though alchemy and speed are you all you have i will allow the levels. I say approved unless another mod or admin has anything they disagree with or see wrong.


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