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 Hakudoshi Rentai

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Yokkyu Fuman



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PostSubject: Hakudoshi Rentai   Thu Dec 23, 2010 2:28 am

Due to reports of other people on other sites using my characters without my permission, this app is now hidden by me, the REAL owner. Im hiding most of my apps because im tired of theifs and being wrongfully accused.


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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai   Thu Dec 23, 2010 2:28 am

The RP sample has been hidden too since peole have been stealing my work and framing ME, the REAL owner.


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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai   Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:03 am

hi ^^,

i am not to sure on the garganta use, that is something you would have to ask Tia. Apparently only current Espada can use it? o.O like i said i don't know xD

and just a couple of things;

1. do you mean adamantine when you speak of your abilities? or something else?
2. Could you place the history in a spoiler it is large which is GOOD but just for ease of reading that would be great ^^
3. A cooldown, preparation etc on the shikai abilities is needed as applicable of course.

and from what i read i don't see why it would be a constant release zanpaktou......??



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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai   Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:43 am

Well, im ttrying to go for a sort of Kenpachi-like thing. I dont want bankai, ym reiatsu is so high my blade is forced into its shikai. However, unlike Kenpachi, i know my zan's name, but he just refuses to give me bankai.

Adamant, is the right word. According to Mozilla's spell checker, Adamintine isnt even a word xD However, I emailed my science teacher (yes, i email her, lol) and she said they're the same thing. They're similar to diamond in many ways, but the chemical makeup isnt the same.

and about my history, ill put it in a spoiler.

Also, my shikai attacks are sort of minor, so i didnt think i would need a cooldown. However, I can understand Barrage needing a cooldown, would ifbe okay if i left Wave the way it was and gave Barrage a cooldown?
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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai   Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:57 am

well i would prefer it had something...maybe 1 post? It just prevents you from going crazy using it xD 1 post isn't much but at least it is something ^^ And the Barrage maybe needs a cooldown of 3 maybe? at the VERY least since it releases thousands of those shards.

Other than that it seems o.k

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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai   Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:56 pm

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Hakudoshi can be very cold, callous, dispassionate figure, and is rather aloof, brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm both his comrades and enemies should they ever get in his way. He refers to anyone he does not find interesting as "trash" and treats them as expendable. Despite this, like most of the other top Shinigami, he is not particularly violent and will only fight when provoked or ordered to by his leader. His cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised or caught off-guard. However, he does not seem to comprehend the Human trait of fighting against all odds or the very concept of the Human heart; when fighting any person who seems to contain a 'heart', literally, symbollicly, or anything of the such, he always looks down on them because they allow their emotions to get in the way of their fight.

Please reword this into your own words or get rid of it, t is copied from wiki (that is o.k if you are doing a canon character but this is from Ulquiorra's page and this is not him)

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Hakudoshi is also lazy and an unenthusiastic character at times, who, apparently spends much of his time thinking and which no one appears to try and stop him from doing. In fact, he rarely directly addresses any being below himself. Despite being one of the highest-ranking Shinigami, he is not eager to take a leadership role, shown when he easily allows others to take over a battle of insignificance. He is not particularly interested in whatever is going on around him, although he is surprisingly observant and a capable analyst. Unlike many of the Shinigami, he is not violent or overly arrogant
Please reword this into your own words ot get rid of it, it is copied from wiki (that is o.k if you are doing a canon character but this is from starrk's page and this is not him)

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PostSubject: Re: Hakudoshi Rentai   Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:44 am

HI,

i am writing to inform you that your character's rank has been stripped due to the fact you neither posted in the activity check or posted an absence thread. Your character app has also been unapproved and moved to the character creation area awaiting a new rank. You may of course re-request your old rank IF IT IS STILL AVAILABLE. Otherwise you must choose from the list of available ranks. If you have any disputes with this decision please contact me, after all mistakes are made.

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