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Renzenku



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PostSubject: Wings of Gods   Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:17 am

New Technique Application


Name: Wings of Gods
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When you learned this tech: Provide links to training/fighting topics where you learned this tech

Duration: 15 Posts OR 5 posts OR 3 Posts
Using Rights: May use normally with suti on (3 posts). May use when Zan is drawn. (15 Posts) Or when Hollow Mask is on (5 posts)
Requirements/Preparations: Renzenku must either have his sword drawn, or his Vizard mask on. When this is done he only needs to speak a single phrase. "May wings alight thy soul and free thee from thine chains"

Description:
When Neither Sword nor Mask is Out: After the phrase is spoken Renzenku may point at someone and have wings sprout from their backs. These wings enable them to fly with ease and grace, as well as give them a 1.5x stat boost to all physical stats. However, while these wings are on them they can not utilize their Spiritual Energy. Can only affect one other person at a time. 3 Post Duration, 3 Post Cooldown.

Zanpakuto Version: This version creates wings made out of particles of dust that allow Renzenku to fly in a more regal fashion. The also look like amazingly cool angel wings. They also imbue a sense of power and angelic royalty in Renzenku, making those who look at him believe him to be a real angel. 15 Post Duration, 4 Post Cooldown.

Hollow Mask Version: Creates wings made of pure condensed white light on Renzenku's back. They make Ren's entire body glow and have something akin to a "Hierro", though not actually. These wings do not exude a brilliant light, as one who looks at them would assume, they are solid light and look identical to the dust ones except far more solid. The glow that Ren acquires is no more then a single watt but is noticeable in dark areas. The light has properties akin to a Hierro, blocking attacks of people with lower spiritual pressure. 5 Post Duration, 5 Post Cooldown.

Weakness: They are quite heavy and actually slow down the user.
Preparation time: None
Duration: See Above (3, 15, 5)
Cooldown: 3 For no Sword/Mask Version, 4 for Zanpakuto Version, 5 For Mask Version


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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:46 am

HI,

I don't think that the duration for the Zan version should be indefinite. It can be long but not forever.

Also since these wings can be given to someone else i believe that there should be stipulation that only 1 person can have the wings at any given time.

The stat boost is FAR TOO high, i'm not sure it should have a stat boost element to it but if it is going to thenit should only be minimal at best. maybe 50%.

Also please stipulate what you mean by low spiritual pressure? do you mean unseated officers etc?

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Tue Jan 04, 2011 5:06 am

How about 15 post duration and five post cooldown?

The rest is okay with me

Low Spiritual pressure being people with less then half my spiritual pressure. Which would be 3rd Seat (just to be fair, it should be Vices-technically).
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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Tue Jan 04, 2011 9:08 am

is that for the znapaktou version ?

Also you have not changed the stat boost level either. Please read through what i said again and make sure you have addressed everything.

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Tue Jan 04, 2011 5:56 pm

Yes that's for the Zan. version.

As well, to the editing thing, I don't edit the original post until after the approval is done or I'm told to edit it in. I always found it easier if people answer the questions directly, and then edit later. Of course that's just from my experience.-.

Editing now though, for your convenience I suppose
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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Wed Jan 05, 2011 7:12 am

Sorry about that xD

Also just so i am clear on everything:

When you say that they can't use their spiritual pressure exactly what does that mean?
Also can others only be given the wings for the 3 posts (sword and mask not out) ?
And how much would these wings slow down the user?

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Wed Jan 05, 2011 7:15 am

It means exactly what it implies; they can not access and utilize their spiritual pressure.

I'm not sure what you're asking by the second question...

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:39 am

Well i meant that it only says that others can be given the wings in one of the forms. Is that right or can they be given them in any of the forms.

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:06 am

The only wings that my be given are the No Sword/Mask varient.
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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:17 pm

Alright then 1/3

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:26 pm

I see nothing wrong with it ^^

2/3 from me sir.
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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:28 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Wings of Gods   Sat Jan 22, 2011 9:17 pm

Alright then you can train now, first of all are you going to train for it solo or with someone?

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