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PostSubject: Maka Zimmer   Fri Feb 11, 2011 1:34 am

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~Basic~

Name: Maka Zimmer
Alias/Nickname: Two-faced Maka
Age: 17
Gender: Female

~Appearance~

Height: 1,65 M
Weight: 55 Kg
Eye Color: Pink
Hair Color/Style: Pink/redish
Complexion: normal
Distinguishing features: She has a large scar running from her wight cheek over her nose to the left cheek, it has a pink shade to it and is more visible during the summer.
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Personality


Personality: Maka is a comulsive liar, she has a twisted personality that makes her lie and tell the truth inter changing. At one point she tells the truth and the next she lies. Yet in the end what one has heard from her is nowhere near the truth as it happened. Maka is smart and isn;t easely deceived, she herself seems sweet but has a murderous urge. Maka has a tendency of provoking people into fighting each other, She loves to watch people get aggrivated. She has no shame and doesn;t shy away from playing the damsel in distress.

She looks like a otaku and a nerd yet she likes nothing more then to feel the bone breaking as her fist plants into the targets face.

Lying, Cheating, confusion and chaos. To her they are what makes the world go round.
Sexuality: Bi
Relationship status: Single
Quirks: Compulsive Liar, she will always tell a diffrent story when asked about her scar.
History:
Maka was raised in a decent family they were normal parent and loved her normally, she was told from an early age that she was only expected to attend school get good grades and find a job. What she wanted for the rest was up to her, Maka however found it boring. She had a strange personality and found that normal humans seemed boring and repetitive. She had a relative large family with lots of uncles and aunts, and every time the family would gather, they would ask the same questions over and over. Maka who was bored found a new game, she started answering the same questions with different answers. It caused the family to squabble underling when discussing Maka as everyone had heard a different story from Maka.

When Maka turned 14 she discovered her power, she was able to produce metals from her skin, She was confused and a little frightend about it. Yet as she learned to control it she understood its potential. She learned to make the metal she needed and how to mold it. She even took up chemistry in her days during high school. Yet obtaining diffrent metals was hard and she was only able to make steel and a explosion mixture.

From the age of 15 she started to get into fights she used her power to beat up people, it started to escalate. From small fights to bigger fights, until one night she went to far. What had been planned as a punch to knock someone out became a neck breaking smash to the face. Maka was taken back, the feeling of taking a life was overwhelming, yet instead of fear or sadness. She felt a sense of liberation, this had been an act she had caused, an act not planned.

During her next two years she stopped fighting but continued lying and deceiving, but on her 17th birthday instead of cake she was arrested. They had finally traced the murder back to Maka. During interrogation she continued to give different stories every time they asked her about the murder. She told them about it with a happy face, she was thrown into a cell until they thought of what to do with her. Maka had no interest in staying put and used her power to blow up the prison wall. She fleed her country and went on the run.

Now she lives as a traveler staying in small towns and working a few weeks before moving on.

~Special Ability~(For special humans only no more than 3 to begin with more can be learnt later on via the new techinique board)

Name: Dragon Skin
Descriptions: Her body gets cover in Steel scales, they can block physical attacks or reduce impacts.The scales are infused with spirit particles from the enviroment. Meaning the scales will harden when in a spirit particles filled enviroment. The scales can also be used to create greater piercing damage and impact damage from punches and kicks. the hardness of the armor is around a tank, it doesn;t break by any bullet but armor piercing rounds wont stop the impact. It prevents zanpaktos from slashing her skin, but a full on strike's impact will still damage her and any strike from lieutenant and up will lickely be unaffected by the armor.
Duration: 5 posts
Preparation: 2 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts

Name: Armory
Descriptions: This skill makes it possible for Maka to create any simple weapon she pictures in her mind, The weapon gets created from the palm of her hand as metal flows and hardens. Because the weapon gets create at her hand making any weapon to heavy for her to use is useless.She can only make simple weapons, complex weapons like guns can not be made. She cannot make anything heavier then 200 Kg. She can only make 2 weapons per post. and she can only have 8 weaopns out at a time, when the limitis reached the oldest wepon breaks apart. the weapons last for four posts before they break apart. The weapons have the same durability as a seated shinigami officer's first stage zanpakto.
Duration: Passive
Preparation: for a weapon to be made she needs to have an empty hand and she needs to be able to open her hand.
Cooldown: 4 posts

Name: Flash bomb
Descriptions: Making a metal shpere in her hand she fills it an explosive metal combination, throwing it towards the enemy a large impact, such as hitting the ground, will cause it to explode and creat a large flash and flying shrapnel. The pieces are filled with spirit particles, and will cause a greater explosion the stronger the spirit particles concentration is. The strength of a human world flash bomb is around 1-2 hand grenades yet a spirit world one would be around twice as strong. She can create 2 per tech use.
Duration: 1 post
Preparation: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts


~Other Information~( She has a pair of glasses but the have glass lenses, she has perfect eyesight and only wears them for show.

~Rp Sample~

*crack* The sound of metal hitting bone, Maka's fist connected with the face of a local gang leader. splurting out blood as he spoke the leader yell out to Maka "WHO DO YOU THINK I AM?". Maka made a small sprint and then kicked the man in the face like a football "Your my idol of course" She hold her hands to her chest and lifted on leg up as she said it as if mocking the man. "YOUR CRAZY" The man turned his bac and tried to run. "But ofcourse i am i just escaped from the local asylum" She smiled as she grabbed him by the back of his neck and skidded his face over the concrete. she fliped him over on his stomach and put her leg over him . With one fluid motion she jumped back, making the man's spine crack. "WHY?" Maka looked into his eyes "Because you killed my father" She grinend and twisted the mans neck finishing him off.


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PostSubject: Re: Maka Zimmer   Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:04 am

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Name: Dragon Skin
Descriptions: Her body gets cover in Steel scales, they can block physical attacks or reduce impacts.The scales are infused with spirit particles from the enviroment. Meaning the scales will harden when in a spirit particles filled enviroment. The scales can also be used to create greater piercing damage and impact damage from punches and kicks.
Duration: 5 posts
Preparation: 2 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Can they block attacks from a zanpaktou? if so i would imagine that the attacks it could reduce damage from would be low strength?

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Name: Armory
Descriptions: This skill makes it possible for Maka to create any weapon she pictures in her mind, The weapon gets created from the palm of her hand as metal flows and hardens. Because the weapon gets create at her hand making any weapon to heavy for her to use is useless.She can only make simple weapons, complex weapons like guns can not be made. She cannot make anything heavier then 200 Kg. She can only make 2 weapons per post.
Duration: Passive
Preparation: for a weapon to be made she needs to have an empty hand and she needs to be able to open her hand.
Cooldown: 4 posts
You contradict yourself here, first you say that she can create any weapon she pictures in her mind. Then you say she can't make guns or complex weapons o.O also you say she can't make things too heavy for her to lift and then you say nothing over 200kgs? O.o How strong are the weapons she creates? and how long do they last? I think also that there should be a limit on how many she can have at one time.

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Name: Flash bomb
Descriptions: Making a metal shpere in her hand she fills it an explosive metal combination, throwing it towards the enemy any shock will cause it to explode and creat a large flash and flying shrapnel. The pieces are filled with spirit particles, and will cause a greater explosion the stronger the spirit particles concentration is. The strength of a human world flash bomb is around 1-2 hand grenades yet a spirit world one would be around twice as strong. She can create 2 per tech use.
Duration: 1 post
Preparation: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
When you say any shock what do you mean? Also i think a cooldown of 3 posts is more appropriate.

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PostSubject: Re: Maka Zimmer   Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:49 am

updated. and i didn't says he can;t make weapons she can;t lift i said it would be useless for her to do so as she can;t wield them. But to give it a limit i put that she can;t create anything heavier than 200 Kg
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PostSubject: Re: Maka Zimmer   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:02 am

So how long do the weapons she makes last ?

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PostSubject: Re: Maka Zimmer   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:12 am

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PostSubject: Re: Maka Zimmer   Fri Feb 11, 2011 12:07 pm

Approved ^^

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