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PostSubject: Goubatsu    Sun Feb 20, 2011 6:50 am

Arrancar/Espada Application


~Basic~

Name: Goubatsu
Alias/Nickname: The Pet
Actual Age: 50
Physical Age: 20
Gender: Male
Rank: N/A
Modified: Yes

~Appearance~

Height: 6'9
Weight: : 195lbs
Eye Color: : Blue
Hair Color/Style: Messy
Complexion: Fair

Remains of Mask: Not seen
Hollow Hole: Found at the base of the neck
Espada Tattoo: N/A
Picture:

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~Personality~

Personality: Goubatsu is a stoic indivisual, unable to express emotions or feel them, mostly when he is around his "master". He is adamant with this personality and will only show affection to someone who he sees as his "master". Only one person can be his master at a time, and he will serve this person and do anything for them. Goubatsu will serve other people if he knows it will benefit his master. He seems mindless at times and just an empty shell. However in battle Goubatsu would change into a monster...and a cruel ruthless and savage one.
Quirks: Doesnt really speak
Sexuality: Straight
Relationship Status: Single
History:

Goubatsu was a wolf when he was in his Hollow form. His bloodlust caused him to continue fighting, and constantly evolve. Because of his constant battle, Goubatsu grew quickly until he became a Vastro Lorde class. However as he evolve, Goubatsu became more bloodthristy and stopped thinking, just jumped into battle. He grew stronger and stronger however the evolutionary process stopped, he nver became an arrancar on his once. When found by Aizen, he was taken and turned into an arrancar by use of the Hogyouku. Due to this being done by the Hogyouku and not naturally, his natural strength increased drastically and when he ripped off his mask he became even more powerful. Aizen modified him similarly to Wonderwiess however Goubatsu never gained a personality like Wonderwiess's. He became silent and never spoke, seeming to not be able to process or think anything besides Aizen's commands. Aizen had created him to be an ultimate weapon in terms of regular combat, and to be the perfect tool that would never turn agaisnt him. However Goubatsu wasnt sent to the Battle of Karakura Town because he was made to be able to fight the Seireitei once Aizen invaded there if he had too. However Aizen never returned, leaving Goubatsu alone in Las Noches masterless. Now Goubatsu wanders Hueco Mundo, looking for a new master.

~Resurreccion~

Name: Taira Ookami
Seal Description: A jaggered katana, being able to slice and rip through things
Aspect of Death: Not an Espada
Release Phrase: N/A, he just grunts
Element/Class type: Pure Melee
Resurreccion Appearance:



~Standard Techniques~

Name: Cero (Can be fired from any point on his body)
Description: As a standard energy blast, it consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target. While in most cases it is fired from the mouth, some Arrancar and Visored are capable of firing Cero from their hands, fingers and other parts of their bodies. This often requires the user to under take a specific pose, with Coyote Starrk being the only exception. Goubatsu's cero doesnt take long to charge, firing reletively quickly.
Duration:: 1 posts
Cool Down: 2 posts

Name: Bala (Can be fired from any point on his body)
Description: A weaker but much faster version of a Cero
Duration:: 1 posts
Cool Down: 1 posts

Name: Sonido
Description: An arrancar's version of a Shunpo. Goubatsu's shunpo is a little slower than average in his pre-ressurection state.
Duration:: 1 posts
Cool Down: 1 posts

Name: Hierro
Description: An Arrancar technique in which the user's reiryoku condenses, creating a steel-hard skin strong enough to block a Zanpakutō. This also allows them to fight some of the sword-wielding Shinigami barehanded. Goubatsu's Hierro due to his modification is highly advanced compared to other fraccion, even equalling that of the 10th Espada's in his pre released stage.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

Name: Pequisa
Description: An Arrancar's method of sensing others. Goubatsu's pequisa is highly advanced not only allowing him to sense others, but he able to determine their strength in a single glance. If someone he surpressing or not showing their true power, he wont be able to judge how much power they do have reserved, but he will be able to tell that they have it.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

Name: Supression
Description: A technique Goubatsu has only due to his modification. This allows him to completely surpress his reaitsu to nothing, making him seem harmless until he need to prove otherwise.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

Name: High Speed Regeneration
Description: Also due to his modification he also possess high speed regeneration, to an advanced degree surpassing Ulquiorra, allowing him to regenerate anything as long as part of his brain and head exists.. He can heal any wound making it as good as new.
Duration:: Minor Wounds (Cuts, Scraps, Burns) 1 posts, Major Wounds (Holes in body, etc), 2 posts, Missing Body Parts 3 posts
Cool Down: 2 posts, 4 posts, 6 posts

~Innate Techniques~

Due to being a modified arrancar, Goubatsu was forced to give up his sanity and in some cases his sense of reason. However in exchange for this Goubatsu naturally has unusual strength, reaitsu and stamina, matching some captains. However once he enters his ressurection, Goubatsu resembles like a Kenpachi. His strength and stamina becomes immense similar that like Kenpachi's, allowing him to give powerful hits as well as take hits and keep fighting on. His reaitsu flares, becomes exceptionally stronger. He can take hits and continue fighting. Goubatsu has an abnormally thick and powerful Hierro allowing for most hits to not actually even get to his actual body. Because of his seemingly single minded ness or his mental absense, Goubatsu isnt generally effected by illusions or anything that effects his mind or emotions. Goubatsu also has a unique sensing ability, an advanced pequisa, allowing for him to detect people instantly and determine their strength and thus threat level. Goubatsu has slightly advanced speed, balance and reflexes, able to keep up with shunpo, however his speed isnt special. Also when in his resurrection, his intellegence increases. Also due to his modification he also possess high speed regeneration, to an advanced degree surpassing Ulquiorra, allowing him to regenerate anything as long as part of his brain exists. Due to when in his ressurection he gains a mask around his mouth, his air is filtered so air aliments do not effect him. He was made to be exceptional at physical combat so he was designed to accomodate that wish.

Name: Senses
Usage:( Both
Description: Since Goubatsu represents a wolf, all of his natural five senses are exceptionally strong, especially sight, smell and hearing.
Duration: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

Name: Sense Removal
Usage:( Both
Description: Goubatsu can remove a sense if he feels like he doesnt need it, or if the sense is threatened or damaged. By doing so, he increases the other senses strength drastically.
Duration: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

Name: Bloodlust
Usage:( Ressurection
Description: Once in ressurection, Goubatsu gains more intellegence. However if he smell or tatses his enemies blood he goes crazy, fighting until his opponent until they are no more. This causes his body to seem to go numb, making him generally immune to actually feeling any blunt of physical pain on the outside of his body, allowing him to fight longer. However things such as shocking and paralzing him would still be effected since it attacks the inside of his body (nervous system).
Duration: Triggered by exposure to blood.
Cool Down: N/A

Name: Demigod
Usage:( Ressurection
Description: Once in ressurection, Goubatsu uses his reaitsu to further strengthen himself. Due to the fact that he has a melee zanpaktou he is ment to specialize in close combat fighting. To assure this when he enters this mode, he is covered in a black aura. In this aura his strength goes through the roof, greatly passing what it was before, and his speed increases to make his shunpo a little above average. His stamina and durability jump, however he gives up all other forms of attack besides physical, relying on pure strength and speed alone. Due to the reaitsu flare his Hierro increased in strength. At this stage, his intellegence boost again, making him seem to be a genius, and allowing him to talk. This form can be deactivated whenever however, then Goubatsu will not be able to ressurect again for the fight.
Duration: 8 posts
Cool Down: N/A

~Rp Sample~
Did this on Tenrai acc.

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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Sun Feb 20, 2011 11:15 am

Space manipulation is not allowed >.<

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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:56 pm

edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Mon Mar 07, 2011 6:57 am

First off whose fraccion is he? And for an arrancar his actual age is too young. Once i know whose fraccion he is i can know what power level to allow for him and look at the rest of the app.

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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Mon Mar 07, 2011 6:59 am

can i find a person in character??
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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Mon Mar 07, 2011 7:29 am

fair enough,

Quote :
Name: Hierro
Description: An Arrancar technique in which the user's reiryoku condenses, creating a steel-hard skin strong enough to block a Zanpakutō. This also allows them to fight some of the sword-wielding Shinigami barehanded. Goubatsu's Hierro due to his modification is highly advanced compared to other fraccion, even equalling that of an Espada's in his pre released stage.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A
Maybe the 10th espada but not just any espada

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Name: Supression
Description: A technique Goubatsu has only due to his modification. This allows him to completely surpress his reaitsu to nothing, making him seem harmless until he need to prove otherwise.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A
This would be only outside of combat.

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His strength and stamina becomes nearly unmatchable, as well as his durability. His reaitsu flares, becomes exceptionally stronger. He can take hits and continue fighting. Goubatsu has an abnormally thick and powerful Hierro allowing for most hits to not actually even get to his actual body. Because of his seemingly single minded ness or his mental absense, Goubatsu isnt generally effected by illusions or anything that effects his mind or emotions

His strength, durability and stamina become nearly unmatchable?! the way that is worded means he is one of the strongest characters there is. And the hierro part is worded so as to suggest that practically no hits by any rank get to him, that is also wrong. And as for not being effected by illusions (generally) if anything his lack of intelligence would make him more prone to it not less.

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Also due to his modification he also possess high speed regeneration, to an advanced degree surpassing Ulquiorra, allowing him to regenerate anything as long as part of his brain exists. Due to when in his ressurection he gains a mask around his mouth, his air is filtered so air aliments do not effect him. He was made to be the perfect weapon in combat so it would seem his abilities match others at the cost of his sanity.
Regen needs to be an ability and have appropriate cooldowns etc. Also reword the last sentence, he was supposed to be the perfect weapon but obviously isn't since that would be op'd. the way its worded seems to suggest that he is.

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Name: Bloodlust
Usage:( Ressurection
Description: Once in ressurection, Goubatsu gains more intellegence. However if he smell or tatses his enemies blood he goes crazy, fighting until his opponent until they are no more. This causes his body to seem to go numb, making him generally immune to actually feeling any pain on his body, allowing him to fight longer.
Duration: Triggered by exposure to blood.
Cool Down: N/A
Bleeding is going to happen in any fight lol so this is basically saying that he will not feel pain. He might not feel pain but if he was electrocuted etc his body would still be unable to move due to the muscle and nerve damage etc. In fact not feeling pain is a weakness, as you don't realise your injuries. but yeah this needs rewording.

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Name: Demigod
Usage:( Ressurection
Description: Once in ressurection, Goubatsu uses his reaitsu to further strengthen himself. Due to the fact that he has a melee zanpaktou he is ment to specialize in close combat fighting. To assure this when he enters this mode, his wounds would heal and he will be covered ina black aura. In this aura his strength goes through the roof, surpassing the strongest shinigami, and his speed increases to make his shunpo a little above average. His stamina and durability jump, however he gives up all other forms of attack besides physical, relying on pure strength and speed alone. At this stage, his intellegence boost again, making him seem to be a genius, and allowing him to talk. This form can be deactivated whenever however, then Goubatsu will not be able to ressurect again for the fight.
Duration: 8 posts
Cool Down: N/A
having all his wounds heal is unfair, his strength surpassing even the strongest shinigami?! no. That means he would surpass the captain commander etc so yeah no. As for the genius part what is the point? And i gather this is a once per topic ability by the way you have worded it?

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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Fri Mar 11, 2011 2:33 am

Quote:
Name: Hierro
Description: An Arrancar technique in which the user's reiryoku condenses, creating a steel-hard skin strong enough to block a Zanpakutō. This also allows them to fight some of the sword-wielding Shinigami barehanded. Goubatsu's Hierro due to his modification is highly advanced compared to other fraccion, even equalling that of an Espada's in his pre released stage.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

Maybe the 10th espada but not just any espada

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Name: Supression
Description: A technique Goubatsu has only due to his modification. This allows him to completely surpress his reaitsu to nothing, making him seem harmless until he need to prove otherwise.
Duration:: N/A
Cool Down: N/A

This would be only outside of combat.

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His strength and stamina becomes nearly unmatchable, as well as his durability. His reaitsu flares, becomes exceptionally stronger. He can take hits and continue fighting. Goubatsu has an abnormally thick and powerful Hierro allowing for most hits to not actually even get to his actual body. Because of his seemingly single minded ness or his mental absense, Goubatsu isnt generally effected by illusions or anything that effects his mind or emotions

His strength, durability and stamina become nearly unmatchable?! the way that is worded means he is one of the strongest characters there is. And the hierro part is worded so as to suggest that practically no hits by any rank get to him, that is also wrong. And as for not being effected by illusions (generally) if anything his lack of intelligence would make him more prone to it not less.

Edited except for the illusion part because if you think about it, the lack of intellgence and emotions makes him generally immune to illusions because he wouldnt care about anything really due to the lack of emotions so he cant be manipluated in that sense, and since he is generally mindless and instictive, things like illusion based clones wouldnt throw him off either because hed just attack all of them without thinking about it.

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Also due to his modification he also possess high speed regeneration, to an advanced degree surpassing Ulquiorra, allowing him to regenerate anything as long as part of his brain exists. Due to when in his ressurection he gains a mask around his mouth, his air is filtered so air aliments do not effect him. He was made to be the perfect weapon in combat so it would seem his abilities match others at the cost of his sanity.

Regen needs to be an ability and have appropriate cooldowns etc. Also reword the last sentence, he was supposed to be the perfect weapon but obviously isn't since that would be op'd. the way its worded seems to suggest that he is.

Edited

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Name: Bloodlust
Usage:( Ressurection
Description: Once in ressurection, Goubatsu gains more intellegence. However if he smell or tatses his enemies blood he goes crazy, fighting until his opponent until they are no more. This causes his body to seem to go numb, making him generally immune to actually feeling any pain on his body, allowing him to fight longer.
Duration: Triggered by exposure to blood.
Cool Down: N/A

Bleeding is going to happen in any fight lol so this is basically saying that he will not feel pain. He might not feel pain but if he was electrocuted etc his body would still be unable to move due to the muscle and nerve damage etc. In fact not feeling pain is a weakness, as you don't realise your injuries. but yeah this needs rewording.

Kk

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Name: Demigod
Usage:( Ressurection
Description: Once in ressurection, Goubatsu uses his reaitsu to further strengthen himself. Due to the fact that he has a melee zanpaktou he is ment to specialize in close combat fighting. To assure this when he enters this mode, his wounds would heal and he will be covered ina black aura. In this aura his strength goes through the roof, surpassing the strongest shinigami, and his speed increases to make his shunpo a little above average. His stamina and durability jump, however he gives up all other forms of attack besides physical, relying on pure strength and speed alone. At this stage, his intellegence boost again, making him seem to be a genius, and allowing him to talk. This form can be deactivated whenever however, then Goubatsu will not be able to ressurect again for the fight.
Duration: 8 posts
Cool Down: N/A


having all his wounds heal is unfair, his strength surpassing even the strongest shinigami?! no. That means he would surpass the captain commander etc so yeah no. As for the genius part what is the point? And i gather this is a once per topic ability by the way you have worded it?

fun lol and yeah
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PostSubject: Re: Goubatsu    Fri Mar 11, 2011 7:30 am

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